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Bleh, this concept is over used. And the way you done it
was off point. Creative yes, but not necessarily. Worder the
whole verse poorly and lots of misspellings that got annoying.
Work on your flow too, because a lot of lines were stretched
so horribly that it didnt flow at all. Imagery was poor and the
emotion wasnt very good either.
Sub-par drop.
chea.
whats sya said.
Always Impervious an Axis Power.
Supermod Me.
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yeah im feelin that, here's the breakdown:-
structure- ok
flow- in general was quite strong, u do lose it at certain points tho
vocab- expressive. u built up a gd sense of fear, just lacked the multi's
overall- 7/10 good work
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The flow was good and so was the story. U need to work on ya vocab cause it seemed too sinplistic. The scheme was plain and wasnt much style to it. It was too average and seemed like it was used. The metas coulda been better but keep writin. Increase the vocab significantly.
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10/10
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Played consept, To manny misspelling, The flow was off as hell too.. lines are way to streched Somewhat Creativty but not enough to make it better than A Meh drop
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not the best i've seen but it was dope but in one place u kinda lost balance on da flow
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