Baby Why

[elemental_game]

baby girl i cant believe its over//
u was my lucky charm my 4 leaf clover//

feelings of love came over me when i was with u//
happy thoughts of growing old and having kids but now i miss u//

screamin and yellin comin over us daily//
tryin to remember happy times but i cant think clearly//

we had a deep love and conection together//
went threw everything from sunshine to stormy weather//

u was gonna have my baby now everything that dream is crushed//
but abortions whats happended now theres no more lust//

how couldnt u see that i gave the world to u//
i bought u clothes and gave u money baby i took care of u//

writin my thoughts down on this paper and sheading lonely tears//
u didnt know but losing u was my worst fear....//

happy days are gone now and all i feel is broken pain//
i dunno what i can do baby besides go insane//

i made u feel good baby and showed u pleasure//
but u couldnt see that are love couldnt be measured//

showin u a better side of life than what u was living//
and u kept me outta trouble and stopped me from sinnin//

are baby wasnt even born and already was going threw hell//
u killed our innocent baby against my will//

i cant believe u did it he couldve been great//
but when u went to that doctor u sealed his fate//


my first OM....its kinda deep bout my girl leaving and having an abortion.....feed is apreciated


links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=218850
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=218876

[Token Muslim]

yo game.....deep shyt man....u kno ya boi had 2 hit dis up.......dis piece had lots of emotion......an damn from wha u said at da bottom i assume this tru......damn hommie u coo???...... i kno u was kinda tellin me she was pregnant........wish u luck on dat hommie....but tight peace i was realii feelin it........no need 2 punches.......jus a feelings rhyme.......loved it........keep droppin man................1

[Lil Fire]

aight well first game u must drop 2 links to feedback u have givin other OMs or this will get closed

i liked the OM it was very heartfelt and emotional u had cosistent flow throughout ur verse i liked the word usage i think the creativity could be better but thats kinda hard since it is bout wat happened in ur life overall a good verse for ur first OM goodjob my nig keep it up

[elemental_game]

yo game.....deep shyt man....u kno ya boi had 2 hit dis up.......dis piece had lots of emotion......an damn from wha u said at da bottom i assume this tru......damn hommie u coo???...... i kno u was kinda tellin me she was pregnant........wish u luck on dat hommie....but tight peace i was realii feelin it........no need 2 punches.......jus a feelings rhyme.......loved it........keep droppin man................1

ya she WAS pregnant but she got an abortion :cry: but ya im ok

[elemental_game]

thanks for the feed yall

[Wreckord]

dam this some real shit fams..that abortion line was deep..good drop..

[elemental_game]

thanks fam....uppin

[elemental_game]

uppin for feed

[TheMerkBros@]

Nice drop fams very emotional and deep dis was very nice fo a first OM
im give dis a 9.5/10

[elemental_game]

thanks fam....uppin for some feed

[wyte boy]

yo i liike that man deep shit................then when i saw that it was real i liked it more man.............. if u ever want a colab holla keep postin...

[elemental_game]

thanks fam....uppin

[NITEMARE_713]

Everything Was Dope Elemental U Got Some True Skillz On A Scale Of 1- 10 I Give It A 10


Keep It Up Homie

[elemental_game]

thanks homie apreciate the feed

[elemental_game]

uppin for some feed