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Thread: just a quick freestyle

  1. #1
    southside g13
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    just a quick freestyle

    i got some feelings of straight killings
    killin unwillin inside crack house buildings
    stickin movin shankin and dankin
    brush to the canvas like the picture im paintin
    with hats turned , herb burned and hot money earned
    goin thru some shit but i aint concerned
    and every body reppin flags
    jamaar got shot memorial on my dog tag
    same old shit
    everybody stay in one clique
    with same ideas of gettin rich
    fuckin the same bitch
    watchin will smith in hitch
    met new era and said i would lead the way
    the prodigy is how they know me today
    im the craziest caucasian to ever hit a mic
    ill jump all over ya ass like ali in fight night
    im a killa smoke to much to be a drug dealer
    so much herbal pracitice like a new age healer
    im reala than ya favorite m.c
    they second to me
    i told you once i told you twice bitch im the prodigy
    talk a mile a minute like it aint hard
    sittin outside blowin dank in my front yard
    with no cops in sight
    my high takes flight
    vibin while i write
    chillin by the day smokin with the hypes
    i hit it by the bag size to the type
    and ill keep inhalin till my brain feelin rype
    no wanksta 100 percent hardcore
    no fuckin whores
    with keys openin doors

  2. #2
    $<-Lucci->$
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    worse is your structure.
    had good rhymes,
    soso flow, cus of early breaks in lines.
    a few punches and metas.
    bad topic! couldve give this one.
    over all not bad.

    if rated: 6/10

  3. #3
    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    flow was the only thing half decent on this piece...your vocab..simple...your imagery..vivid but your topic was played..and old...your wordplay wasnt there and you could use some complexity and some multis...keep elevatin and droppin.~1~


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    no freestyles.

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