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  1. August 3rd, 2005, 09:09 PM #1
    Eazy-E
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    Lock down

    Yo we locked down like animalz behind barz
    If I could get from behind barz would give up all the fanvy carz
    7 hr of bein out that cell
    Still don't matter this place stank as hell
    Them soft nigga hung themself usin sumthin like a rope
    Causae they waz scared the next day the might drop the soap
    Nigga think this place cool out ur fuckin mind
    U think it's cool seein niggas gettin raped all the time
    I be holdin it for niggas out side
    Cause when I get out I know I'm gonna shine
    Locked don wit ankle weight and hand cuff
    We see the sun 2 houses a day ain't that enough
    We they tell u a education is a bad thing to waste
    Wish I would of know when I stabbed that dude in the face
    Jail is like stayin in a bathroom for year
    Word of advice don't let nobody see u shed tears
    Kill to survie in this bitch no fun and game
    Fuck wut then niggas say when u get out u'll heva be tha sanme
    Tryin to escape bout three monthes ago
    Got away for a day and got my ass put back in for 2 more
    2 more year to my but don't give a fuck
    Cause when I waz out all I did waz live it up
    Might neva get out 10 more yr in this cell
    Man fuck this I rather go to hell
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  2. August 3rd, 2005, 09:11 PM #2
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  3. August 3rd, 2005, 09:16 PM #3
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    i got ya homie...Ok ur flow for one was ehh, all over and ur wordplay was aight...The idea is good and the emotion and fear is good...seems like u actaully been there almost...The shit u talked about was scary and I feel ya on the u gotta watch ur back all the time shit...I give it an ok rating but I know u can do better...Elevate and no hate
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  4. August 3rd, 2005, 09:19 PM #4
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  5. August 3rd, 2005, 09:23 PM #5
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    yo ez i liked that verse it was tight u should b a topical head seriously i'll even open up a spot for u
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  6. August 3rd, 2005, 09:24 PM #6
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    Thx dogg I might do that
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  7. August 3rd, 2005, 09:27 PM #7
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    was crackin eazy??? i liked it, but i know u can do better b.......wordplay was very nice........flow was ok........i really liked all the ideas u had.....shows u have a gd mind and sence of thought........i realii feel u on watching ur back cuz when u live in our world u have 2.......

    by the way make sure u post 2 links 4 positive feedback u left, or ur thread will get closed
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  8. August 3rd, 2005, 09:28 PM #8
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  9. August 3rd, 2005, 09:31 PM #9
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    goodjob eazy that was a dope verse you could of worked on the structure the flow was really good could of reworded your verse and upped your vocab but all and all it was a decent open mic good job keep evaluating and keep postin more open mics
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  10. August 3rd, 2005, 09:32 PM #10
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  11. August 3rd, 2005, 09:38 PM #11
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    this was a nice piece..of shit!....j/p..it was coo..lil long tho..but overall nice drop..propz..
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  12. August 3rd, 2005, 09:39 PM #12
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  13. August 3rd, 2005, 09:42 PM #13
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    im def feelin da concept homie and i agree wit route... u really make it seem u have dat experience...my only comlpaint is da words u rhymed wit and vocab( not always da same thing ppl lol) but flow was pretty good... and da message was def received... much love fo dis one homie
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  14. August 3rd, 2005, 09:52 PM #14
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