TC Presents: George Bush & Politics

[Foreshadow]

Foreshadow

You call yourself a leader of world peace
Bitch please, Blow the world on both knees
Talk propaganda about your fuckin oil spill
Bring the blood from Iraq to fuckin capital hill
How would you like that? Americans fight back
Who needs the war to give Bush a Nightcap?
Die please! Thee god damn years until you seize
Someone pull the trigger & release for American peace
Speak on your beliefs. Die of fuckin heart disease
I want to turn to CNN & hear that you’ve deceased
A political parade with AK’s. John Kerry it’s your payday
I want to see you on a surveillance tape, letting the gage spray
I'll put Dick Cheney in much pain & slave
Then let lesbians decorate his grave
The whole bush regime is silenced
There’s a motherfucking reason the peace protests got violent

BKS

I used to think Bush was for America, once but nope
Cause what real President beleives in guns and hope
Every single one of his acts and ways is funny
I don't understand how adding taxes saves us money
Whites and asians man, they got it but don't take a stand
Just step out of the box and give my race a chance
But it isn't just Bush, he isn't to hate. This is the case..
Every President promises. get sworn in then shit on ya face
They start up a war, and they start bombing like crazy
Next thing you know you going to the army or navy
With ya charming brigade deep and armed with m-80s
Thinking you can save up for a few cars or mercedes
It's almost a choice. either there or bars and a cell
Either way you're just another target for hell
Wondering what and where you are with ya health
Lose an eye or somethin then you're talkin in brail
Remain calm, hault. Take a quick breather.
Cause shit.. If I had his power I wouldn't give a shit neither

[Vylint]

'A political parade with AK’s. John Kerry it’s your payday
I want to see you on a surveillance tape, letting the gage spray
I'll put Dick Cheney in much pain & slave
Then let lesbians decorate his grave
The whole bush regime is silenced
There’s a motherfucking reason the peace protests got violent'

illl


'They start up a war, and they start bombing like crazy
Next thing you know you going to the army or navy
With ya charming brigade deep and armed with m-80s
Thinking you can save up for a few cars or mercedes'


sick


good shit boys. played topic but its wateva

[Foreshadow]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214538

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214525

[Kaotic Theory]

wow i thought this was pretty dope honestly, the flow and multies were sexy yo...the concept ive seen done before many times buit not in this format,the emotion was dope basically because it was both of yours opinions on the president and its politics so i cant really say nothing there,the imagery was good you both expressed your views on the current and past times, overall i found this a solid and successful collab...nice work guys

[Harry Potter]

that was fucking ill
u stayed on topic. had crazy history and wit
that was nuts dude.

[Sobe]

nice flow and multies first of all foreshadow..

you and bks both did well..seriously, i cannot pick out a few quotables because basically this whole thing should be quoted..many pieces with this concept were written..but this had the most effect imo..

i'll nominate it..

[Facts Machine]

Damn this was sick, so many quotables like...

Talk propaganda about your fuckin oil spill
Bring the blood from Iraq to fuckin capital hill
How would you like that? Americans fight back
Who needs the war to give Bush a Nightcap?
I'll put Dick Cheney in much pain & slave
Then let lesbians decorate his grave
The whole bush regime is silenced
There’s a motherfucking reason the peace protests got violent

and BKS's whole verse was a quotable, he made great points especially the closer.
Too bad i wasn't in this, i gotta whole lot to say about bush.
keep at this, ya'll.

[Duzt]

this was very nice, i always love tracks on bush and his fucked up ways

Talk propaganda about your fuckin oil spill
Bring the blood from Iraq to fuckin capital hill
How would you like that? Americans fight back
Who needs the war to give Bush a Nightcap?
Die please! Thee god damn years until you seize
Someone pull the trigger & release for American peace

ya flow is rugged and it seems you have an "in ur face style" which is always an enjoyable read

I used to think Bush was for America, once but nope
Cause what real President beleives in guns and hope
Every single one of his acts and ways is funny
I don't understand how adding taxes saves us money
Whites and asians man, they got it but don't take a stand
Just step out of the box and give my race a chance
But it isn't just Bush, he isn't to hate. This is the case..
Every President promises. get sworn in then shit on ya face

BKS you can very nice as well, neither of you outshined the other one so thats always a positive

this was a really enjoyable read...good shit fellas

[Koke AKA KoKaNe]

very nice read just like Duzt said

Fore:

Talk propaganda about your fuckin oil spill
Bring the blood from Iraq to fuckin capital hill
How would you like that? Americans fight back
Who needs the war to give Bush a Nightcap?
Die please! Thee god damn years until you seize
Someone pull the trigger & release for American peace
Speak on your beliefs. Die of fuckin heart disease
I want to turn to CNN & hear that you’ve deceased

^^ Loved that part a smooth flow


BKS:

Whites and asians man, they got it but don't take a stand
Just step out of the box and give my race a chance
But it isn't just Bush, he isn't to hate. This is the case..
Every President promises. get sworn in then shit on ya face
They start up a war, and they start bombing like crazy
Next thing you know you going to the army or navy

^^ very nice and contains truth too

props to you both

[Foreshadow]

Thanks uppin...

[sILLable]

not bad...both pieces were ill...all aspects were tight....the only thing was your topic was played....but you pulled it off very nicely anyway...keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

[Deviate]

Foreshadow

I have to say I've always looked up to you since I joined, I remember reading an OM of yours back in February when I started and it helped me learn... I haven't read much from you recently, but this was good, you clearly are still at it. This was a nice piece, something I think appeals to most as this is a relevant subject today. You had some incredible lines, the capital hill line stands to mind when I look back now. I like the way you wrote it, it wasn't a story or from a particular perspective, it was just a solid view expressed in some quite thought provoking ways. Flow was excellent as a result of the multies you included, which were also good.

BKS

You wrote with a similar style to Foreshadow, using some great metaphors and examples to convey your point. Your part was enjoyable and, again, very thought provoking. You had a great flow and a lot of multies which made it just all fit together perfectly.

Overall this was a great collab because you both have a similar style. This was an enjoyable piece, not the sort of thing I'm used to reading which was a nice change. Keep it up! Your crew is really making an impact by the sounds of it, Sylentz was filling me in yesterday, so keep at it... Keep this place alive!

Thanks for the nomination and feedback on "Turn it up only to Turn it Off"

[Jawn Raw]

damn tight shit what most i was feelin in this was the creative flow sounded like some underground shit when you read it out loud wit a wisper type voice i was goin fast n shit it was tight stucture was good from both a little different style from you forshadow but it was good i miss you being so lyrical but it was pretty good overall. bk was good as well evenly i thought yall were similiar at most good job to both.

rtf in my om standing and falling on my own links in the sig, for if you havent left feed then can you thanks also you to bk thanks.

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[Foreshadow]

Thanks for the feedback... Deviate get at me on aim...

Senor Disciple

[Artik Phrost]

I'll put Dick Cheney in much pain & slave
Then let lesbians decorate his grave

^lmao....

comments:...this was pretty kew...i come from a whole different way of text...so, ive seen deeper..IMO...but, this was nonetheless kew...

but, i could personally care less bout structure...ya'll flow was kew...ive seen pieces on things like this...i always find it amusing what people say....ya'll spoke the truth...throughout...so i give yall respects on that.....

keep the pens going