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Thread: bewitched rhymes

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    Unhappy bewitched rhymes

    im a self-proclaimed lyrical villain//born in a cannibals village//baptized with the blood of a demon//the air dat i breathe out disengage yo body from yo soul like alex philmon//
    i feed on humans//my footsteps cant be detected coz my tracks are covered with bitumen//im so undaground every rapper dat i kill get burried in a catacomb//xterminating all the female species damaging their wombs//
    so dat there wont be any rebirth of a rapping generation//
    destroying de hiphop nation//ultimate genocide
    the end of u and yo mickey mouse rhymes//
    when i put end to them//i b swinging punchlines like a pendulum//
    leaving u deeply drowning in yo doldrums//
    droping china walls/o'nest sets on/verbal wars/
    and many of yall gonna back off//
    o'nest the lyrical warfare revolutionary//aftermath of hitler's military
    b the last man standing when all of this b done happening
    live 4 eva like a real perinnial//blessed with the spirits of ancient gods//
    coz i was the first to drink the blood of JESUS dripping from the cross//
    when i spit out my rhymes are followed by sudden violent upheavals
    ghostly spiritualised/forthcoming actions cant be visualised//
    nobodu really knows who i am/cant be defined im supernaturally declined//
    as the fusion of good and evil left many crews mourning//
    while my status keep soaring//
    the feeling is frantic/characterised with magic//
    and the reality is static................

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    You need to post two links, to two OMs you left decent feedback on, or this gets closed, thanks.
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    dreadedfistofthenorthwest
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    this was alright I guess, good grammer yo know keep up the posts an youll get good man.
    The R.
    -The Illest Ever Kid-

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