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    Apostle OS
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    .!.::! Gats and Jackets !::.!.

    .!.::! Gats and Jackets !::.!.

    I see a familiar face from when I first learned how to mac it,
    said he'd be right back, back ina month and hadda packet,
    he couldn't getta grasp on the package up in the attic,
    when addicts act up, it adds up, from gats to jackets.

    I ain't mad no more n'nah I ain't sad no more,
    runnin for the back door always scrappin for,
    "this can not happen,"
    cause damn yo, it's a trap to score,
    while I'm grabbin the dough,
    "ain't this what craps is for?"

    But that's life,
    I'm sure that there are pains that crack can cure,
    and I might,
    but there's light from the crack in the door,
    late at night,
    "I see" my Mother on her knees like she sees me in "the light",
    please Lord, don't let her see me in the syph.

    x-Chorus-x

    We strap gats and jackets . . .
    numb to good-byes,
    it's never ever gonna get easy if,
    We strap gats and jackets . . .
    the Sun will rise,
    word to the wise don't waste your time . . . . . .
    for God to give you signs.

    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIiIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
    [..:::ii GGSRG~TR ii:::..]
    IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIiIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

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    Apostle OS
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    Sublime D - "Game Over"
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...39#post2779039

    DiverseSyndicate - "Cancerous Pt.2 . . . the ending . . ."
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=212991

  3. #3
    Apostle OS
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    . . .<<<<<<<<<<<<. . .uPPin. . .>>>>>>>>>>>>>. . .

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    chill
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    this best part about this was flow & rhyme scheme...but i got a little confused at parts like:
    I see a familiar face from when I first learned how to mac it,
    said he'd be right back, back ina month and hadda packet,
    he couldn't getta grasp on the package up in the attic,
    when addicts act up, it adds up, from gats to jackets.

    ^i dunno, maybe you can explain it to me, but i didn't understand that part too well... i could tell most likely you wrote this for audio... just try to make it easier to understand for the reader.
    She said I could sleep on the couch
    By 2 am, I was diggin her out

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    When are you gonna learn, you can only post one new thread a day, jesus, read the fucking rules. All your other threads were deleted, but I left this open, since you were good enough to post links. Please limit yourself to making only one new thread every 24 hours.
    ...

  6. #6
    Apostle OS
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    up up up and awayyyyyy . . . . need feed back nowwwww . . . . .

  7. #7
    Apostle OS
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    uppin . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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    This piece had a good flow to it... I only caught the content in the first snippet of a verse... But man just add some more content to your work like make it have a story and s hit you feel me... Keep elevatin..

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