10 lines
no bittin
no recy
no crew votes
15 min check
30 min drop
blind spit
10 lines
no bittin
no recy
no crew votes
15 min check
30 min drop
blind spit
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listen i call death apon niggaz like da grim reaper
i fuckin hate soft niggaz like yall i cant even see ya
yall niggaz rap like yall in tha dynasty
but ill have ur ass bowing down to me sayin yes ur majesty
you aint got a chance ill have ur face sewed up and lanced
cuz dis dat jack move ill have ur ass chewed up like my pitbulls food
you fuck wit me u gunna have gangstas get at u
u really piss me off ima have that gat spit at you
ill have niggas at u wit macs in ya face
cuz the only protection u got is a half empty bottle of mace
Ight mUrda.....
This a suicide Son u suckin on Groin Sections ya Tapes On The Shelf
Put the Tre To Yaself, It's In The Alphabet, check it bitch, K's Before the L
My tracks Hot, like I Lay em in Hell u cant Fool Me,I Pull Back Shotz
Cause the Only Time K Ever Shines, is in a Fuckin Jewelery Shop
This is about skills u Dont have...an fuck what ppl say about a Rec
Watchin Cam'ron Rehersals Is the Only Time U near a Killa Mic Check*
Killin yah Brian Waves....Wit Raps That Cn Never Be over Played
fuck the DramaKing, the Lamaz bring, Shots that leave K Slayed
This is Like The Dark Side ur Death is coming Imperial
A Im Sayin Ur Special K...Cuz I Jus Put Yah body parts in a Box like the Cereal*
*killa Cam mic checks u get it....
*Special K Cereal....
this nigga talkin bout cereal wen he messin a cereal killa
ill knock your ass out like ali in the thrilla in minilla
u try fuckin wit me u fuckin wit the whole team
but i aint gotta bring em in cuz u softa then ice cream
aint no0 way u gunna survive wen my guns get to clappin
cuz ill have ur mom on my dick tellin my how much her sons a little bastard
u can think u gonna beat me in a battle but u gunna lose
u could put on 10 pairs of socks and u still couldnt fit in my shoes
i dont even need more than 10 lines to show this fool its a rap
cuz if shit really goes down ima be breakin faces wit bats
it's only one verse dumbass.....................
but anyway...Mah vote goes to JAe
Jae:for one his punches were a hellov alot beter
stand out line:
This is Like The Dark Side ur Death is coming Imperial
A Im Sayin Ur Special K...Cuz I Jus Put Yah body parts in a Box like the Cereal
^kinda went off flow....
Mic: verse wuz juss so elementary
stand out lines:..............................none
both emcees stay elevating and keep ya head up
RETURN DA FAVOR
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Jae Won This Battle, His Punches Were A Lot Tighter, Wordplay Was Gud And Vocab Was Slightly (And I Do Mean Slightly) Better. Killa, Work On Ur Creativity In Wordplay Vocab And Punches Cuz Ur Flow Was Better...
VOTE: JAE .R. FREEZE
Jae won this.Wordplay was better and so was his structure until the end:"This is Like The Dark Side ur Death is coming Imperial
A Im Sayin Ur Special K...Cuz I Jus Put Yah body parts in a Box like the Cereal*"
And also Jae's punches were tight(Most of dem actaully hit kill).
Return da favor
freeze you had a better structure an verse overall. you had good punches an vocab.. If i could poll a vote it would be you.... sry i can
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I've Created A Monster
-Eminem
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Jae had this all the way better conectors and harder punches with better flow decent structure, killa work on wordplay and better ounches decent battle return the favor with the battle in my sig thnx guys peace
jeah
Im the one hit wonder
I hit you once
You be wondering wat the fuck hit you
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yo...check this battle out ----> http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=214967
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