30-40 lines, your call.
Check in by Thursday, drop by Friday (midnight EST)
Good Luck man
and... check.
30-40 lines, your call.
Check in by Thursday, drop by Friday (midnight EST)
Good Luck man
and... check.
30 lines...
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made you look.
You're jumped up, you're weak, the beefing's sucked your fatigue
and thx man, I'm in the final.. coz you fucked up the league
I'll leave you bleeding you gay prick... you're broke? then get payed bitch
If Spit wasn't a boy growing up... he'd have had nuthin to play with
So don't say shit.. I'll drill you, wanted to beat me? you still do
Coz $pit knows comp doesn't hurt,.but minus the P... it'll kill you
A win puts cash in ya pocket so your run? watch me stop it
Because change is inevitable... unless I'm taking $pits wallet
So keep the cash, you need it, pitiful prize means more to you
I could spread one verse across a season... and win more in 1-2
Take young boys under your wing?
..... everyone's wondering what's a matter man
Now I'ma drive you up the wall, so no need for Lay's Batarang
I'll slap this fag and scorn him, crack your chest till it falls in
The only freestyle this bitch's got is getting dressed in the morning
So fall in for accusations, I got a son but nought for $pit
Coz the only sparkle in his eye...is when I come and torch his bitch
I bought ya shit now I'm in Last Word, what positions are we hit with?
I'm the brains and $pits the muscle..
.....that you use to snap your shit with
Illiterate prick its no wonder, you've got no friends bitch, we've shunned ya
Shit since Lay was recently banned.. I've been withstricting my number
I'll put this bitch in a slumber, slap a defeat down to stun ya
You always take things too far..
..so lets see you take this... six feet under
I'll strike like thunder, storm ya house.. you talk the walk with your mouth
But great minds think alike.. thats why we always fall out
I'm going all out on this faggot, while his every tackles scorned
I deserve being born to battle...you only deserve to battle Born
You weren't the first man created.. so please don't act like it bitch
But $pit turn over a new leaf?... we'd just all laugh at his dick
I feel the hunger from this prick so I'd have come harder if I could
Because $pits known to outperform... in the subway for food
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barely made the deadline. strainin so hard I was almost blinded
when I went to check ya chin. n' spent an hour tryin ta find it
jesus ya wack. n' I almost didn't show up to dead the match
I just kept starin at ya picture.. waitin for ya head to hatch
I'd make a crack at you havin cancer, but it's probably true
I should be facing feeble minded. but I guess feeble bodied'll do
get bent when I'm callin. you know my intent when I'm ballin
money aside, I'ma kick ya ass so hard I'll put a dent in ya wallet
I tear at ya neck. say what you want, I don't care I'm the best
n' hoe I'll smash ya head down so far it'll put hair on ya chest
compare us, n' yes.. the title's mine. these hoes'll witness
shut you down so quick, ya vital signs'll say closed for business
far as disses, no reason to get mad. kid only mine matters
so when you act up, I just kick back. until ya spine shatters
n' after I sink ya ship captain, I bet a bitch float
but there's no tellin what'll happen. cuz I'ma cut ya snitch throat
even ya bitch disrespects you. me? I'd bust off, rock the hoe
dog.. you wouldn't be any less of a man. it's just not possible
you ain't got the endurance to run this, so just quit rappin
never forget ya weak. cuz even memory lapse would leave you gaspin
now bow to the great baby. n' fag you could just stay hating
hoe I only B-friended you, cuz you weren't worth the A rating
actin like the new sheriff in town. dog ya makin me laugh
bitch I'ma take the law into my own hands. n' break it in half
laugh n' I'm comin out punchin. hoe I don't lie I'ma swinger
n' after I make you see my point, I'll wipe ya eye off my finger
fuck you thinkin? tell the coronor to prepare the chalk
the hell you gonna question my skill, when I got ya scared to talk?
everything I say is true... hoe it's time to pay ya dues.
but COM you've been a good sport. so I'll just keep playin you
good. night. baby.
So don't say shit.. I'll drill you, wanted to beat me? you still do
Coz $pit knows comp doesn't hurt,.but minus the P... it'll kill you
A win puts cash in ya pocket so your run? watch me stop it
Because change is inevitable... unless I'm taking $pits wallet
I'll slap this fag and scorn him, crack your chest till it falls in
The only freestyle this bitch's got is getting dressed in the morning
So fall in for accusations, I got a son but nought for $pit
Coz the only sparkle in his eye...is when I come and torch his bitch
I bought ya shit now I'm in Last Word, what positions are we hit with?
I'm the brains and $pits the muscle..
.....that you use to snap your shit with
I'm going all out on this faggot, while his every tackles scorned
I deserve being born to battle...you only deserve to battle Born
v
get bent when I'm callin. you know my intent when I'm ballin
money aside, I'ma kick ya ass so hard I'll put a dent in ya wallet
^only line i didnt think was as dope as the rest...
I think its pretty clear here... good verse COM, but $pit took this shit fairly easy, with a hella dope verse. Congrats to him...
V/ $pitacular
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Vote: Spit
It was a really dope battle, and you could tell that all these opponents gave it their all in this battle. It was also closer than my colleague made it seem up there.
Overall it was good. I liked most of the punches, and these two battlers have a certain distinct style that sets them apart from the others we've seen around here. It was worthy of a championship match. Good job.
But there must be a winner, and I think just by overall verses, not taking one bar by one bar and shit... Spit took this.
Vote: $pitacular
Wrecks.
So don't say shit.. I'll drill you, wanted to beat me? you still do
Coz $pit knows comp doesn't hurt,.but minus the P... it'll kill you
A win puts cash in ya pocket so your run? watch me stop it
Because change is inevitable... unless I'm taking $pits wallet
So keep the cash, you need it, pitiful prize means more to you
I could spread one verse across a season... and win more in 1-2
I'll slap this fag and scorn him, crack your chest till it falls in
The only freestyle this bitch's got is getting dressed in the morning
I bought ya shit now I'm in Last Word, what positions are we hit with?
I'm the brains and $pits the muscle..
.....that you use to snap your shit with
Illiterate prick its no wonder, you've got no friends bitch, we've shunned ya
Shit since Lay was recently banned.. I've been withstricting my number
I'll put this bitch in a slumber, slap a defeat down to stun ya
You always take things too far..
..so lets see you take this... six feet under
I'm going all out on this faggot, while his every tackles scorned
I deserve being born to battle...you only deserve to battle Born
bold was hilarious...best line of ya verse to me
these were the nice/dope/clever concepts i liked....some needed some touchin up, but overall a very solid verse man..props for makin it this far
vs
jesus ya wack. n' I almost didn't show up to dead the match
I just kept starin at ya picture.. waitin for ya head to hatch
get bent when I'm callin. you know my intent when I'm ballin
money aside, I'ma kick ya ass so hard I'll put a dent in ya wallet
I tear at ya neck. say what you want, I don't care I'm the best
n' hoe I'll smash ya head down so far it'll put hair on ya chest
compare us, n' yes.. the title's mine. these hoes'll witness
shut you down so quick, ya vital signs'll say closed for business
far as disses, no reason to get mad. kid only mine matters
so when you act up, I just kick back. until ya spine shatters
you ain't got the endurance to run this, so just quit rappin
never forget ya weak. cuz even memory lapse would leave you gaspin
now bow to the great baby. n' fag you could just stay hating
hoe I only B-friended you, cuz you weren't worth the A rating
actin like the new sheriff in town. dog ya makin me laugh
bitch I'ma take the law into my own hands. n' break it in half
fuck you thinkin? tell the coronor to prepare the chalk
the hell you gonna question my skill, when I got ya scared to talk?
the bolded part was by far the dopest shit in the battle imo...rest were some hot lines/coo concepts wit a few lil tweeks needed imo...
very good champ match......props to spit also...i came expectin to see him drop tight and mr fagular didnt upset.....
16-18 in quoteables.....with spit havin the stronger 6 to me anyways.....so with that
i drop this vote for spitacular.....def worth the read....archive this? it was better than last seasons finals...i can say that much.
.Dohpe.
.Been There-Sonned Cats.
I'll slap this fag and scorn him, crack your chest till it falls in
The only freestyle this bitch's got is getting dressed in the morning
^lmfao
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You're jumped up, you're weak, the beefing's sucked your fatigue
and thx man, I'm in the final.. coz you fucked up the league
A win puts cash in ya pocket so your run? watch me stop it
Because change is inevitable... unless I'm taking $pits wallet
^HILARIOUS
So fall in for accusations, I got a son but nought for $pit
Coz the only sparkle in his eye...is when I come and torch his bitch
I bought ya shit now I'm in Last Word, what positions are we hit with?
I'm the brains and $pits the muscle..
.....that you use to snap your shit with
I'll strike like thunder, storm ya house.. you talk the walk with your mouth
But great minds think alike.. thats why we always fall out
I'm going all out on this faggot, while his every tackles scorned
I deserve being born to battle...you only deserve to battle Born
You weren't the first man created.. so please don't act like it bitch
But $pit turn over a new leaf?... we'd just all laugh at his dick
vs
barely made the deadline. strainin so hard I was almost blinded
when I went to check ya chin. n' spent an hour tryin ta find it
jesus ya wack. n' I almost didn't show up to dead the match
I just kept starin at ya picture.. waitin for ya head to hatch
I'd make a crack at you havin cancer, but it's probably true
I should be facing feeble minded. but I guess feeble bodied'll do
I tear at ya neck. say what you want, I don't care I'm the best
n' hoe I'll smash ya head down so far it'll put hair on ya chest
as disses, no reason to get mad. kid only mine matters
so when you act up, I just kick back. until ya spine shatters
n' after I sink ya ship captain, I bet a bitch float
but there's no tellin what'll happen. cuz I'ma cut ya snitch throat
even ya bitch disrespects you. me? I'd bust off, rock the hoe
dog.. you wouldn't be any less of a man. it's just not possible
you ain't got the endurance to run this, so just quit rappin
never forget ya weak. cuz even memory lapse would leave you gaspin
now bow to the great baby. n' fag you could just stay hating
hoe I only B-friended you, cuz you weren't worth the A rating
laugh n' I'm comin out punchin. hoe I don't lie I'ma swinger
n' after I make you see my point, I'll wipe ya eye off my finger
V/ Spit, wow at 3/4 of Spit verse being dope, Com made a valiant effort, but i dont think too many people coulda beat that verse, dope shit, and congrats
<----Chewy/Mr. Key btw
You're jumped up, you're weak, the beefing's sucked your fatigue
and thx man, I'm in the final.. coz you fucked up the league
So don't say shit.. I'll drill you, wanted to beat me? you still do
Coz $pit knows comp doesn't hurt,.but minus the P... it'll kill you
A win puts cash in ya pocket so your run? watch me stop it
Because change is inevitable... unless I'm taking $pits wallet
Illiterate prick its no wonder, you've got no friends bitch, we've shunned ya
Shit since Lay was recently banned.. I've been withstricting my number
You weren't the first man created.. so please don't act like it bitch
But $pit turn over a new leaf?... we'd just all laugh at his dick
Not bad at all COM. Pretty consistent with the dopeness...
a little too many cliche's for a verse, but it was 30 lines.
Overall cool as verse bro.
barely made the deadline. strainin so hard I was almost blinded
when I went to check ya chin. n' spent an hour tryin ta find it
jesus ya wack. n' I almost didn't show up to dead the match
I just kept starin at ya picture.. waitin for ya head to hatch
get bent when I'm callin. you know my intent when I'm ballin
money aside, I'ma kick ya ass so hard I'll put a dent in ya wallet
I tear at ya neck. say what you want, I don't care I'm the best
n' hoe I'll smash ya head down so far it'll put hair on ya chest
compare us, n' yes.. the title's mine. these hoes'll witness
shut you down so quick, ya vital signs'll say closed for business
even ya bitch disrespects you. me? I'd bust off, rock the hoe
dog.. you wouldn't be any less of a man. it's just not possible
Although I didn't think Spit had ALOT more quotables, I have to say that his were funny as shit.
Specifically the "hatching" line and the "hair on your chest".
Those were two of the best I've seen in a while.
Real dope verse.
champ = Spit
so I guess that's it...
word good battle COM
Vote- Spit
I know its closed but I promised people I'd come peep and vote.
AI
fuck, i couldnt vote as i was at my dad's. i thought this was really close. spit won.. but honestly without the pic advantage i dont know if he would have won or not. they both put up solid verses, with some good lines.. but both have come better. still, a good, solid battle.. nothing wack. good finish for a strong season.
congrats both of you