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  1. #1
    *Peaches*
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    kill

    first, get ya target is that the mothafucka you wanna kill
    once you all set to kill em, let out everyhting you feel
    dont hesitate to snap they neck or hit em in they chin
    killin aint no joke its a game you must win
    dont feel sorry for the mothafucka, they caused you all types of trouble
    then when you get all the blood out of em have em layin in they own puddle
    yo enemy might try to talk you out of it but its nothin but bullshit
    get ya ahit over with
    dont wait around, kill em dry very quick
    this persons face might follow thru ya dreams but keep ya self up at all means
    while killin em, torture em and let em feel all the suffering you had
    remember to clean up everyhting cus soon you might see ya face on the front page ad
    after you done get rid of all eveidence make sure not to leave shit behind
    dont ever let ya self down about committin this crime

  2. #2
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    lol.......... ok...........first of all... the other drop you dropped was good but this one was not that good.... the rhymes were not good... sum didnt even rhyme and sum of the lines were pointless to have and the inside that supposed to support the topic was all over the place.... this drop wasnt that interesting .... the strucutre was off effecting the flow makin it not easy to read.. but anywzy keep it up.... and elevate and keep improving as well

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