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Thread: Only God Can Judge Me

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    Only God Can Judge Me

    Only God Can Judge Me
    By The Untouchable One And Tupac


    [Chorus]

    Call me a thug...
    Exclude from the love
    Stereotype me now...but believe...

    Only god can judge me...


    [Untouchable]

    Im forced to become frail and occupy another jail cell
    This young black male not supposed to prevail in this land of hell
    Profits always good when the crack sells
    Makin $50 a week strictly off of Black Male
    My whole life...I went through pain, Thus I find somber in the cocaine
    They look at me and judge who I am...and occupy my head with blame
    Im the reason this world has changed...
    'The thugs are deranged', yet we didnt hit them buildings with those planes
    The thugs dont higher gas prices and make the customers go insane
    Dont treat me differently...
    Or belittle my beliefs...
    Because In the end...Only god can judge me...


    [Chorus]

    Call me a thug...
    Exclude from the love
    Stereotype me now...but believe...

    Only god can judge me...


    [Tupac]

    Perhaps, I was blind to tha facts Stabbed in tha back
    I Couldn't trust my own homies, Just a bunch a dirty rats
    Will I succeed, Paranoid from the weed
    And hocus pocus try to focus But I can't see
    And in my mind I'm a blind man doin' time
    Look to my future Cause my past is all behind
    Is it a crime To fight for what is mine?
    Everybodies dyin' Tell me, Whats the use of tryin'
    I've been trapped since birth Cautious, cause I'm cursed
    And fantansies of my family In a hearse
    And they say It's the white man I should fear
    But it's my own kind Doin' all the killin' here
    Oh my lord Tell me what I'm livin' for
    Everybodies droppin' Got me knockin' on heaven's door
    And all my memories Of seeing brothas bleed
    And everybody grieves But still nobody sees
    Recollect your thoughts, Don't get caught up in tha mix
    Cause this whole world is full of dirty tricks


    [Chorus]

    Call me a thug...
    Exclude from the love
    Stereotype me now...but believe...

    Only god can judge me...


    [Untouchable]

    Hate is a strong word...
    N' when hundreds of people hate U...U feel cursed
    Trapped at birth, with a thirst-
    For violence n' crime...noone cares enough to put U in church
    They blame me...but im not the one snatchin Ur purse
    Im the one workin n' doin bids...tryin to support a wife and kid
    Yet U stereotype me...because im an African American?
    People like U are the reason we'll never blend
    Culture changes...as does the trend
    Time spent with the cocaine blurring my scent
    Im guilty for tryin to stay alive, makin sure my family will survive
    Every morning thinkin what if I shall die
    Perhaps the next morning...I wont rise
    I deceive the eyes, they judge in their mind
    Hate me...but know inside-
    Im not the 'bad' in this world that U wanna fight


    [Chorus]

    Call me a thug...
    Exclude from the love
    Stereotype me now...but believe...

    Only god can judge me...


    [Tupac]

    I hear the doctor standing over me Screaming I can make it
    Got a body full of bullet holes Laying here naked
    Still I can't breathe something evils in my I-V
    Cuz everytime I breathe I think their killing me
    I'm having nightmares, Homicidal fantansies
    I wake up stranglin' Danglin' My bed sheets
    I call the nurse Cuz it hurts To reminise, How did it come to this?
    Tell me where to go from here? Cuz even thugs cry But do the Lord care? Tryin' to remember But it hurts
    I'm walking through the cementary Talkin' to the dirt
    I'd rather die like a man Than live like a coward
    There's a ghetto up in Heaven And its ours, "Black Power"
    Is what we scream, As we dream In a paranoid state
    And our fate Is a lifetime of hate
    Dear mama, can you save me?
    And fuck peace Cuz the streets got our babies
    We gotta eat No more hesitation Each and every black males trapped
    And they wonder why we suicidal Runnin' around strapped
    Mr. Police Please try to see
    That there's a million muthafuckas stressin' just like me


    [Untouchable]

    Society has pushed me to put the gun to my head...and drop to my knees
    So now...

    Only God Can Judge Me...


    [Chorus]

    Call me a thug...
    Exclude from the love
    Stereotype me now...but believe...

    Only god can judge me...

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    Uppin for feedback...

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    Im the one workin n' doin bids...tryin to support a wife and kid
    Yet U stereotype me...because im an African American?
    People like U are the reason we'll never blend
    ^favorite segment, strong message

    Wow intresting concept, never seen anyone do a verse over
    another emcees track but using there verse as well. You did
    a great job on the format which is important. Another thing
    you did was match the writers tone of voice. not make it
    cheerful or insightful when it's melancholy.

    and of course I loved this from tupac..

    I'd rather die like a man Than live like a coward
    There's a ghetto up in Heaven And its ours, "Black Power"
    Is what we scream, As we dream In a paranoid state
    And our fate Is a lifetime of hate
    Dear mama, can you save me?

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    Thanks for the feed man...

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    I don't believe in god... and i dont like all the tu pac shit... meh other than not much to say i liked the structure and all.. and had good rhyme... not bad just work on a little creativity.... not bad keep it up.

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    I would thank U for feedback...

    But nigga...U dont like tupac? How can U not like tupac? I have never met ONE person involved in hip hop that doesnt like tupac...

    The religious part...I cant argue with U on that.

    Thanks...I guess...

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    uppin....

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    deep man, deep. im likin that. i never met no one involved in hip hop who aint likin tupac. overall 9/10. 1

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    terep
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    any feed back on ma posts wud be appreciated.

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