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  1. June 18th, 2005, 10:42 PM #1
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    Crying Mothers Son

    CRYING MOTHERS SON

    A young man who doesn't understand tha world
    lives for his mother, cause shes a woman of pearl
    everyday he walks the streets looking to help her
    but he gets caught in the game, now smokin weed he perfer
    addicted to drugs and violence this man never incline
    now a crackhead with nothing, his life continues to decline
    till his fate finally took a series of bad turns
    he meets with a crack dealer that ask him if he burns
    now fallin out by the hand of a gun
    now you peep out the story of a Crying Mothers Son

    that goes to my boy who no longer with us RIP Blaze the crack and drugs got hold of him now he dead cause a crack dealer wanted to get a crackhead of the streets we will miss you boy
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  2. June 18th, 2005, 10:44 PM #2
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    couldn't put everything down it got to me but because of him thats my passion to succeed
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  3. June 18th, 2005, 10:56 PM #3
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    yo you got to edit this cuz there is a 16 line minimum rule.. need to follow or it gets closed yo...
    anywayz...simple rhymez and flow and the structure was alright.. need improvment.. keep elevating and keep up drops.. ok/good job.. overall 7.5/10 this can be better.. have a good night
  4. June 18th, 2005, 11:02 PM #4
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    its was str-8 simple tho......work on yo flow i give it 7/10

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  5. June 18th, 2005, 11:15 PM #5
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    that was hot nigga
  6. June 18th, 2005, 11:17 PM #6
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    i liked the way u put passion into dat shit
  7. June 18th, 2005, 11:18 PM #7
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    ayo u should drop another verse on this .........................................o an check out my battle against lil saint..................he aint drop yet but i did
  8. June 18th, 2005, 11:18 PM #8
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    ^ahhhhhhh^ more feed thats 1 line.... unbeleivable... hahhahahaha
    by the weay in my other feed... this was ral hot but needs a lil bit more of improvement and this would be a 9! like i siad before.. good night
  9. June 18th, 2005, 11:20 PM #9
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    yo i need a co-leader 4 immortal souls so who ever wanna try out i'll give u a position now
  10. June 19th, 2005, 01:11 AM #10
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    it was very short, I would've liked to see
    a longer peice seeing as how this had more
    meaning then just any other verse to you...
  11. June 19th, 2005, 02:11 AM #11
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    alot of emotiogn and depth but really short should add 1 or 2 more verse so it will be
    a much fuller song... but ur flow and structure were all right
    i just think u should redo this with a few more verse and repost
    ud probably geta better feed
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  12. June 19th, 2005, 08:29 AM #12
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