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Thread: Remix "Soldier" by:Eminem

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    Remix "Soldier" by:Eminem

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    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=202204
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...908post2562908



    Soldier:Eminem ft.Vertikle


    (I'm a soldier) (A Soldier) (A Soldier born and raised)

    (Chorus) (Eminem) (x2)
    (I'm a soldier) these soldiers hold up so much.
    They Won't Budge, I'll never fall or fold up.
    (I'm a soldier) even if my collar bone's crushed.
    And I crumble, I will never slip or stumble.

    (Verse 1) (Vertikle)

    Rap's a gift, that'll shift through different gears.
    Drink a couple of beers, wipe away all my tears.
    Peers don't pressure, the media provokes measures.
    Makes smoking look cool and makes killing look fresher.
    So I pack a gun, sit and smoke a sack for fun.
    Keep away from backstabbers, so I only relax wit some.
    When the fact is done, I'm a soldier, laugh and run.
    Got two heaters, but I'll tear through ya back wit one.
    I've won respect, by putting out my head and neck.
    Been left for dead, so I don't know wat will come next.
    With sex, I'm a champ, watch this deep love connect.
    Piss on MCs, who consider themselves to be a vet.
    Rhymes that are crazy, watch the lines delivered by shady.
    You can't make me choose love, cause shit don't phase me.

    (Chorus) (Eminem) (x2)
    (I'm a soldier) these soldiers hold up so much.
    They Won't Budge, I'll never fall or fold up.
    (I'm a soldier) even if my collar bone's crushed.
    And I crumble, I will never slip or stumble.

    (Verse 2) (Eminem)
    I love pissin' you off, it gets me off, like my lawyers, when the fuckin' judge lets me off
    all you motherfuckas gotta do is set me off, I'll violate and all the motherfuckin' bets be off
    I'm a lit fuse, anything I do bring it's news, pistol whippin' motherfuckin' bouncers, six-two, who needs bullets?
    Soon as I pull it, you sweat bullets, an excellent method to get rid of the next bully
    It's actually better cause instead you murderin', you can hurt em' and come back again and kick dirt at em
    it's like pourin' salt in the wounds, assault and get sued, you can smell the lawsuits soon as I waltz in the room
    everybody halts and stops, calls the cops, all you see is bitches comin' out their halter tops
    runnin' and duckin' out to the Hot Rocks parking lot, you'll all get shot whether its your fault or not, cus...


    (Chorus) (Eminem) (x2)
    (I'm a soldier) these soldiers hold up so much.
    They Won't Budge, I'll never fall or fold up.
    (I'm a soldier) even if my collar bone's crushed.
    And I crumble, I will never slip or stumble.

    (Verse 3) (Vertikle/Eminem)
    (Vertikle)
    Thought of concealing a pistol, always been caught in the middle.
    Blasting and crashing places, like a fucking nuclear missle.
    Fizzle a little, because my life is in constant chaos from enemies.
    Percent of these people, say their friends, but they pretend to be.
    (Eminem)
    (true)
    I spit it slow so these kids know that I'm talkin' to em, give it back to these damn critics and sock it to em
    I'm like a thug, with a little bit of Pac influence, I spew it, and look how I got you bitches rockin' to it
    you motherfuckas could never do it like I could do it, don't even try it, you'll look stupid, do not pursue it
    don't ever in your life, try to knock the truest, I spit the illest shit, ever been dropped to two inch
    so ticky-tock listen as the sound ticks on the clock, listen to the sound of Kim as she licks on a cock
    listen to the sound of me spillin' my heart through this pen, motherfuckers know that I'll never be Marshall again


    (Outro) (x2) (Vertikle)
    A Soldier, Soldeir, I told ya son you can't hold me.
    I shoot ya if ya fuck wit my family or me homie.

  2. #2
    Vertikle
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    uppin

  3. #3
    Vertikle
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    uppin for feedback, come on guys

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    well... well ...well... this was cool.. i liked the verse 1 and chorus ext. that made me feel like i was reading the accuall lyrics form eminem.. i'd accually like this 500% better if i could hear eminem rap this.. (an audio).. the rhymes were real nice.. i was feelin this all the way.. good flow and all.. good job.. keep elevating

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    Whoever did that eminem verse is hot but your verse was decent man, i think you should have came with more discription and creativity than doing that "by eminem" stuff but stay up man!
    PM for battle

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    i agree that eminem verse was real hot.. like i said in my other post.. good job man.. who ever did that verse.. i'd love to see another one by you and him.. and yor verse was simple.. nuthin personal.. just keep elevating

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    LMAO that verse was hot yall dudes are crazy dont yall know thats em man and he is remixing duhhhhhhhhh if yall even bothered to look at that shit but thats good vert you suprised me a lot good job fam keep it up

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    thanx

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    that was some ill shit god,i loved tha imagery,u had ill vocab and wordplay,ill complexity,i liked tha multis and tha way it was layed out,it flowed well,and stayed consistent and on point,this was mos def an ill piece god,keep droppin tha hottness.~1`


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    this was an ill piece god,i loved tha imagery,tight wordplay,ill vocab and complexity,i thought it flowed very nicley,it was consistent and i loved your use of multis in this piece,ill ass piece god,keep droppin tha hottness.~1~


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  11. #11
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    lol thanx, I love your 2 posts lol

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    thanx

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    Yo vert man I tried the same thing on a differant song not to steal your idea though man but I liked your shit I think it was dope you had the whole theme down get a chance and peep my shit out and let me know it was just some shit that I had to get off of my chest something I had been thinking of for a long time man Your concepts inspired me to finish it homie keep that shit up man aight 1

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    thanx

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    yo, nice drop...flow and structure were both on point and made for a nice read...nice use of multis too...vocab wasn't bad, a little simple at times but i don't think it took anything away from the peice...content was good and stuck with the original song...keep up the good work and keep dropping....

    Peers don't pressure, the media provokes measures.
    Makes smoking look cool and makes killing look fresher.

    that line stood out to me the most...

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