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Who thinks i should put this in audio this week?
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ayo... this is really hot and shit... goes great with the beat.. and since a lotta underground rappers are trying that rock beat typa shit this would be hot.. but the only problem is the beat is wayyy too loud for the chorus nah mean... but its going to be a hot song to the people that like listening to real music instead of g-unit and shit haha.. good shit 9.5/10
Nice drop kid. I was really feeling this piece. The structure was good. The flow was also nice and never got off point. You had some nice use of multis in there. Vocab was good also. Content was nice as you really got your point across with some raw emotions. I could feel everything you had to say. You also had some nice imagery in there too. Overall i thought it was a very good drop and the song really flowed well over the beat. Can't wait to hear it in audio. Keep up the good work and keep dropping.
Cause In Reality Not Even I Can Solve This, It’s Self Solving…
Seems I’m Getting Closer To Being Put In Hell’s Cauldron…
They Say That Life’s An Uphill Struggle, Why Am I Descending?...
Maybe It’s Something To Do With The People I’m Friends With…
I Like The Fact I’m Defending…. Someone Putting My Neck On The Line…
Having A Heck Of A Time Splitting Me From Myself Like Jekyll And Hyde…
just a few of the lines that stood out to me...
hella ill piece god.....its gonna sound real good on audio...i like tha complexity you use and your rhyme scheme,your structure is tight,your wordplay was ill,i like tha creativity and tha way this piece was layed out it flowed very easily.keep droppin tha hottness.~1~
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Good topic, i really the caught the emotion of the piece. You kept it moving which is difficult to do at this length. Consistently dope multi's and solid vocab. Good imagery as well. Just an all round dope piece man. The hook was good as well.
Keep Posting.
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Recording This Today
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ill...im waitin for the audio version
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i thought this wa sshit.
very terrbile, you need to work on flow and maybe learns some more vocab.
and dont bold your stiff its gay, and you might want to pick out new beats. cuz that beat was whack. elevate man.
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it was good i like the scheme and stlye
9/10
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