An interesting style switch here Issue, it had the really fragmented theme which i think reinforced the topic, along with the horrifying twist at the end. Are you gonna make this an audio? You should. Good imagery, great imagery actually. Strong vocab, occasionally simply rhymes but again this worked in the context of the piece. It was gripping from start to finish. Good work.
Keep reppin us right man.
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Kost, what's ur alias??
Thanks for the feed, Upppp
that drop was nice man a lot of twist in the story at no point did i get bored you used a lot of vocab I was very impressed not that i am someone to impress but u did your thing i liked how it started at one extreme and went all the way to the other great job
Why didn't y'all delete my ugly ass sig while I was gone?
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I like your sig, thanks for the feed.
Thank everyone for the feed so far,,,
Upp'n this...
I have to agree wid most people here.. you brought a new style
For me u told the story well and it was eays to follow
Was nice written with good choice of words which helps a whole lot more
Suprsing twist at the end
Good wordplay and effort gve u good resulst
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Ah a very dope peice, A nice abstract feeling to it. I like your use of multis, very well used.
Structure was also dope, Very original, which is always a good addition to a peice.
Your story line was also good,
Not much i can say, other than dope. Sorry i cant leave more feed.
I would nominate this for OM Hall Of Fame, But its already been done
Hit Up Me And Deviate collab
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=197248
I'll hit up the links later tonight when Im bored, when I can read them and leave at least decent feed lol.
Thanks for the feed man,
Uppppp
No thank you....
Upp'n for some good feed.
yo issue when u gon' check my shit out homie? common dawg i respect u tha most, mo than ne o these niggaz up in hurr! yo feed is important to me cuz i no i can learn frum ya man! check it out, s'in my signature... called: I miss my dawgs
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I have done brother, sorry it took so long....
Very nice drop Issue...sorry i won't give you such an indepth feed,but it's already morning and i haven't had sleep at all.This was very nice.A kinda different style than you usual have.I think it suited the piece great.Your imagery was well done,sometimes simplistic but it just blended in with your aproach so well.The flow was solid,and i liked the rhymescheme.Again i feel it worked very well with your aproach.I feel the same way as Johnny with the vocab.I liked the emotion;it was complex.And your ending was great.Didn't see it at all.Very nice piece my man.Gonna go nominate it.Peace!
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Thank you a lot K9!
Upp'n like a mofo...
this shit was sooo hot, man your creativity is on fire, your flow was there, the vocab was incredible, the thought was completely behind it, everything was great abotu this man.....we should collab sometime....peace out man
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thank you for the feed mixtape, glad you liked it...
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