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Thread: Killin The Bitch!!

  1. May 23rd, 2005, 04:37 PM #1
    Brainz
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    Arrow Killin The Bitch!!

    ( I wrote it in 2 min.)
    Honest to rap this is an unusual topic//
    So as hard as it is to pop it I'll still drop it//
    Explodin with anger just wanna strangle her//
    Reloadin the patients before I mangle her//
    My hearts racin dont wanna kill the girl//
    Shes a pearl but at times makes my world swirl//
    With thoughts of me committing homicide//
    If I ever do it Imma commit suicide//
    Murder Better yet lets call it spouse killing//
    I might need a twinkie to relaxe me wheres the cream filling//
    I aint gonna front we have fun and lots of adventures//
    But things that she say make me not want to play and wrench her//
    Cut her brain out and in her own blood I'll drench her//
    Or maybe pull out the shank while she sleeps//
    Then drag outside to bury her but hurry back to erase the streaks//
    Since I'm planning I'll get murder in the first degree//
    Shall I carry out the mission I'll just wait an see//
    Baby I'm wishin you'll change can't you see?//
    Or maybe I'll just end you along with ya Pregnancy//
    You gonna make me do it all out of fustration and rage//
    I used to love you.. so this feeling is strange//

    (just a play around)


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    Dead in the middle of Little Italy little did we know
    that we riddled some middleman who didn't do diddily
    ~Big Pun~


    I rub your face off the Earth and curse your family children
    like Amityville drill the nerves in your cavity fillin
    Insanity's building up pavillion in my civilian
    The cannon be the anarchy that humanity's dealing
    A villain without remorse, who's willing to out your boss
    Forever and take all the cheddar like child support
    ~Big Pun~
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  2. May 23rd, 2005, 04:41 PM #2
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    Whoa.

    Pretty retarted topic.

    And meh story, work on your flow, vocab etc.

    I was like this when i started, keep it up man. Youll get there
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  3. May 25th, 2005, 02:57 PM #3
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    What i was gonna say is the exact same thing Kamikaze said just work on ya "topic" and ya"flow" and the ya ready to go.
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  4. May 25th, 2005, 03:14 PM #4
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    yo have skillz you just need to refine them a little but ur still better than i am

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  5. May 25th, 2005, 03:52 PM #5
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    LoL thanks man

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    Dead in the middle of Little Italy little did we know
    that we riddled some middleman who didn't do diddily
    ~Big Pun~


    I rub your face off the Earth and curse your family children
    like Amityville drill the nerves in your cavity fillin
    Insanity's building up pavillion in my civilian
    The cannon be the anarchy that humanity's dealing
    A villain without remorse, who's willing to out your boss
    Forever and take all the cheddar like child support
    ~Big Pun~
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  6. May 25th, 2005, 05:47 PM #6
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    that shit was crazy but at the same tight it was good. keep working at it dawg
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  7. May 26th, 2005, 06:33 AM #7
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    That was mad

    That drop was mad but if you work on your flow it could be better, i didn't feel this was ill at all! You do have potential though! Use some different vocab dont use the same basic shit and you'll sound ill!
    written voices makes hidden noises
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  8. May 26th, 2005, 08:30 AM #8
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    Whoa....Voilent topic........Wierd.

    Your story was meh....Work on flow man, structure as well........And use better vocabulary and multis...Soon you will get there.

    Keep Droppin
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