.::SS piece::.Jealousy wounds

[K9_THESHIT]

uppin in despite.

[Illus']

Ok..

Interesting piece...From the topic you chosen it
seems like you didn't hit the topic directly but
you actually did with a style I used before. Nice
word usage to bring out the uniquenes of this piece.
I really liked the beginning part

"I stand alone and empty in a bled shadow,
Infested, rotten like a dead pharaoh,
Undigested thoughts thundering to be forgotten
drip poison in my infected marrow,
…My soul’s crested from a broken Cupid’s arrow…
"

Great imagery and emotion shown there. I really
did like the word usage. I wouldn't be surprised
if some readers however were confused and lost
at the angle you chosen for this topic. Reason
why I understand in my opinion is because I did
something like this before.. Was called Spiritual-WarFear.

anyways nice drop keep it up.