10 lines max
House rules and all that
you drop first, i'll get links and post them with my verse
10 lines max
House rules and all that
you drop first, i'll get links and post them with my verse
Yo this dude heres name is slut
Thinks hes a slut but no girls let him bust his nut
They look at this wannab emcee an wish he looked like me
Pimpled face faggot thinks he can bang any girl but that i cant see
See i cant make you look any worse so ill just beat and batter u wid dis verse
We diverse, u take breathers as i disperse a verse which will send u to a hearse
I laugh cause ur name is funny, especially the avatar, it makes me laugh
Ur life line be flat saying u have no life left, laugh cause i stabbed u with a gaff
Yo ur lifetime had to end cause ur a slut, or u think and so u pretend
Anyways this ur time of reckoning ur end, and for me its time to transcend
too easy...
yo,
Fuck the dumb shit, kid thinks he's a rebel
So call me God, its obvious i'm above the Devil
Wack newb, did you honestly think you could see me
Cuz its known Slut ends more War, than a peace treaty
Lyrical Assassins? i shoulda known you'd get buried
Only good thing that came from LA, was Darryl Strawberry
Silly ferry, take one look at my text, surely you'll be rattled
Funny how my name is Slut, but you're gettin fucked in this battle
So when i said you were horrible, thats exactly what i meant
Because i just witnessed the posterchild for text retirement
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=193359
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...37#post2443037
one sided battle..
nothing
vs
Cuz its known Slut ends more War, than a peace treaty
Lyrical Assassins? i shoulda known you'd get buried
Only good thing that came from LA, was Darryl Strawberry
Silly ferry, take one look at my text, surely you'll be rattled
Funny how my name is Slut, but you're gettin fucked in this battle
So when i said you were horrible, thats exactly what i meant
Because i just witnessed the posterchild for text retirement
vote = slut for having punches and connecting
good look yo
uppin this battle, if you vote leave links and ii'll vote on your battles.
v/devil war
nice puch lines
and word play
My Vote Has To Go To Devil War No Doubt The Other Brother Put It Best Nothing Vs. Lots Of Punches My Vote For Comming Harder Is
V/devil War
Cant Poll No Enough Post My Bad
Silly ferry, take one look at my text, surely you'll be rattled
Funny how my name is Slut, but you're gettin fucked in this battle
..lol, and it's over.
v/ Slut
attempts at witty punches.
Been a real one.
you all that voted for devil war, are retarded herbs
votes werent explained enough anyway...
wow...lmao..
Damn...lately these battle's been close...but only 1 of u cat's git my vote...Slut had sum good personals...but Devil came a lil harder by flippin them words...good shit both of yall.
voteevil War
On Trax I'm Vicious Untamed And Malicious In They Face Blowin Up Like Airbag's And Bubblicious
im going to go wit war becase i liked his punches an how he put it together
devil war-
Yo this dude heres name is slut
Thinks hes a slut but no girls let him bust his nut
...played opener...
They look at this wannab emcee an wish he looked like me
Pimpled face faggot thinks he can bang any girl but that i cant see
...eh weak punch....
See i cant make you look any worse so ill just beat and batter u wid dis verse
We diverse, u take breathers as i disperse a verse which will send u to a hearse
....alright.......
I laugh cause ur name is funny, especially the avatar, it makes me laugh
Ur life line be flat saying u have no life left, laugh cause i stabbed u with a gaff
.....weak........
Yo ur lifetime had to end cause ur a slut, or u think and so u pretend
Anyways this ur time of reckoning ur end, and for me its time to transcend
...played........
overall-3/10
alright no hate, but you had no real punches or personals. you just need to elevate
slut-
Fuck the dumb shit, kid thinks he's a rebel
So call me God, its obvious i'm above the Devil
..nice opener....
Wack newb, did you honestly think you could see me
Cuz its known Slut ends more War, than a peace treaty
...alright....
Lyrical Assassins? i shoulda known you'd get buried
Only good thing that came from LA, was Darryl Strawberry
....not bad.......
Silly ferry, take one look at my text, surely you'll be rattled
Funny how my name is Slut, but you're gettin fucked in this battle
...good punch....
So when i said you were horrible, thats exactly what i meant
Because i just witnessed the posterchild for text retirement
...good closer....
overall-7/10
not a bad verse. you had good punches and personals. you took this easy. it was a one sided battle.
v/slut
lol upping for votes to get this shit closed close so far 3-2..
lol dam it upping for god dam votes...so vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shit... Devil, your shit was decent. Work on structure and better disses. Slut, same, but you did come harder. I know you can do better, I've seen you on other battles. Slut, better punches and personals. Better structure to. OMG people... Structure is fucking crucial to winning battles. Good structure won't piss people off and maybe lose you a vote.
My vote/ Slut
RTF in link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=195076
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