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Thread: The Real Me

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    The Real Me

    If god is waiting, then my observations should be accepted
    They want us to change but we cant our hoods be rejected
    violence erupts, silence is up, im letting my rage out
    Im a guy too crazy, who maybe, using his pen as a pain scout
    Never quiet, terror riots, explode on these heartless streets
    Disasters a fact, were plastered in tats, so they mark us bleak
    There hasnt been a recent cry, im a decent guy, but im a hot head
    My style is dark, i'll probably smile and laugh, when i drop dead
    Im raping courage and bedding fear, who's shedding tears?
    Probably a bunch of people, when im drunk im lethal, i'll be dead in years
    Within the next ten i guess, no more family only my pen i stress
    Without a doubt friends lie yes, im calling the devil to end my test
    Im thinking constant, im using blood cause ink is nonsense
    Im spitting out my arrogance and start drinking my conscience
    Dealers are extorting the fiends, im just reporting the screams
    Stuck in my head, im giving birth to my demise and aborting my dreams
    My path is a lone road, cause of my life my heart is stone cold
    Im in my home stoned, people think their superior cause they own gold
    People wanna see their funds stack, or add another addition to the gun rack
    Do you think the world will change? Do you think jesus is gonna come back?
    Do you really hold a nine? Do you really control your spine?
    I put my drinking over rhymes, maybe i'll understand with an older mind
    Im twenty one so i should of learnt already but the biggest gimmick is earth
    Oh fuck this im gonna unleash the real me and not even finish the verse

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    nice flow,vocab,couple of multies....nice man...keep droppin

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    Warchild you always drop nice shit...this is in the top of your shit...prolly within the top 10 out of all ur drops....it had nice vocab...nice multis when u had them....... my fav line is

    "There hasnt been a recent cry, im a decent guy, but im a hot head
    My style is dark, i'll probably smile and laugh, when i drop dead"

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    Come on people a bit more feed uppin.

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    liked the topic and i dug the consistent multi's you had, the vocab was solid and you kept the pace moving throughout. liked the imagery where you used it and the kind of 'thought process' feel to the whole piece.

    keep on posting man.

    you and i should hit collab sometime.

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    thats dope man

    great vocab and shit... your multies were great.... this is an awesome verse

    I used to read a lot of your shit when i first joined with my first name... AND NOW your shit is even better...dope man..good job...

    id love a collab some time

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    Appreciate the feed, if you wanna collabo pm me the concept and i'll try and write some crazy shit i work nights so it will take me a couple of days to pen something, i cant be bothered to write everyday.

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    Uppin.

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    Thanks for sleeping as usual jealousys a bitch aint it lol.

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    The True Psycho of RB
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    Hahahahahaha.

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    Within the next ten i guess, no more family only my pen i stress
    ^^that lined made the most deepest impact

    then you had to follow it with this which was mad in my opinion:

    Without a doubt friends lie yes, im calling the devil to end my test
    ^^wtf ..... be careful what you wish for, this line was stupid to right in my opinion..... even if you meant it

    anyway the rest was deep, keep up
    "actions speak louder than words"

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    mad props u had ill lines mad multis nice vocab.. nothign bad about it in my opinion
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