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    Ayo juss alil somethin get at me wit some feedback.

    my flows somethin like BIG's before da Rampart SCANDEL/
    i got my MFG's* complamented by da 45 HANDLE/

    im like ANTHRAX, sick and INFECTIOUS/
    i get more pussy den TAMPAX and genocoligist INSPECTIONS/

    if i could turn back da CLOCK id bring back PAC/
    da flow ill leave you in tramatic SHOCK cuz its raw like Jadakiss and D-BLOCK/

    Pac once said "everybody knwo da nigga thas gonna kill ya" its TRUE/
    when you see me in 745 its gonna be a DE JA VU/

    my freestyles INSANE alot like CASSIDY/
    da flow ill scramble ya BRAIN and da vocabulary got TENACITY/

    you know da byrd got da sick word PLAY/
    ill SPRAY da AK bring ya MAYDAY i got satans DNA ill kill you da medival WAY/

    *MFG's- Marithe Francois Girbaud pants.

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    uppin for some feedback

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    Jus a lil somethin...iz exactly that...a LIL somethin...kinda weak..you need to drop some deeper shit..like all you talkin bout iz self glorification which is somethin that people get tired of seeing and dont really want to read..up ur flow cuz it needs work and up ur use of metaphors and creativity..

    No Hate..Jus Truth

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    yea no doubt good lookin

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    pretty good and all but I think it would've been better if it wasnt all glorifacation but actually that was pretty good, did u freestyle it? or did u write that?

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