Gangsta

[Yung Blaze]

(Intro)
Time To Right Something Just For My Mommy(Gangsta)

(Verse1)
I wrote about stickin' the mami's
Wrote about lickin' the tommy
It's time for me to write some shit for my mommy
My mother, and not only to tell her I love her
But to show her how the pen can cause her kid to grow up
I don't even be lying no more, mah, I'm honest
I'm not playing with guns no more neither, I promise
I'm not hanging with the donnas
He my dog and I love him but fuckin' with son is just too much drama
I wonder how it woulda be if you had the chance to raise me
Would I still not know how to romance a lady?
Is it cause you made me a cancer baby
That I stay on some crab shit so nobody get the chance to portray me
Whatever it is yo I ain't tryin' to let it go
I'm focused mah, I know what I'm headed for
Oh, before I let you go
You might not knew it before so I'm telling you now to let you know

(Chorus)
If this world were mine
I would place at your feet
All that I own
You've been so good to me(repeat twice)

(Verse2)
I remember the everyday arguments
Part of it was fuckin' with my common sense
The other part of it gave me the confidence
To do what I was doing
Only if I knew what I was doing
When, what, and who was I pursuing
Being thirteen years old guzzlin' gold
Coming home drunk; you crying while I stumble and fold
Remember you had your son like a bum in the cold
Cuz you was movin' my kicks and found jums in the sole?
But man I was a young man just runnin' the road
Trying to make a little crumbs cuz wasn't none in my bowl
I hated to see you struggle for gold
When you really deserved ice double the cold
That glow like your colorful soul
Mom, my love for you has wanted to grow
Last ten times stronger than any couple that's old
Oh, before I let you go
You might not knew it before so I'm telling you now to let you know

(Chorus)
If this world were mine
I would place at your feet
All that I own
You've been so good to me(repeat twice)

(Verse3)
Yo I said they could never give enough cheddar to me
To talk about the lady that made me negatively
Even though eye to eye something we never could see
My mother's the one woman no other one ever could be
See she gon' be proud when I blow like Nagasaki
Don't ever regret lettin' them cell blocks adopt me
Jail was a blessin' mommy; my nation stood by me
They got me in places regular faces can't find me
As Omega my crimey, told me I'm so ahead of my time
Even when they fast forward niggaz rewind me
I learned about Malcom, Marcus, and Kwame
About the white man why he feed us spiced ham
Spam, and salami
Lyrically they can't deny me
All I need is your love, your trust and just for you to stand by me
Oh, yo before I let you go
You might not knew it before so I'm telling you now to let you

Yea Straight To Mom Dukes U Know

[Trema]

(Intro)
Time To Right Something Just For My Mommy(Gangsta)

(Verse1)

But to show her how the pen can cause her kid to grow up
I don't even be lying no more, mah, I'm honest
^^what u use to lie home boy?

I'm not playing with guns no more neither, I promise
I'm not hanging with the donnas
wat? i dont understand

the rest was ok but it didn't make dat much sense to me,you need to work on yo structure and your wordplay, the topic was good and i know your mum means alot to you but homz you could of done better! for real

[Liquid Sword]

This open mic right here to be honest was not very "Gangsta". The flow was too simple. I would say I like the way it came from the heart but it honestly sounded like a bunch of bullshit to me. At least you tried...

Now that's "Gangsta"

[Yung Blaze]

that was the wrong title i was going to write about that shit but i changed it and what i meant is with that lying line was lying in general

[Bounce]

First off, you sig is fucking up our forum reduce it, fix it do something to it! Next you must include two links to soldi replies you have left on other OM's. Pleae make sure they are detailed and in depth or this will be closed...