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    Fallen Soldier

    Nights are calm, the moonshine bleeds through the cover
    Of the clouds, and reaches the face of a fallen brother
    The fleeting moments in his eyes realize a fate
    As his soul ascends to the front of heaven’s gates
    Back on the street, others struggle to gather
    If this soldier wasn’t a soldier, would his death matter?
    Society acts a certain way, u cant explain
    Based on a job, family, reputation or fame
    If his family wasn’t trying to live in the ghetto
    Would the soldier stay where he was, relax and settle
    Was it the fact that others needed someone to look up to?
    Because they have nobody, it can almost erupt you
    He felt it was his job, to allow the youth to aspire
    To believe in dreams, seems u can always go higher
    But others didn’t realize the possibilities
    They blame the successful ones for their hostility
    So they let loose the bullets destroying the dreams
    For what? He wasn’t a rich man, just like u and me
    See u can change the lives, no matter the wealth
    Then I realized, this soldier wasn’t a soldier, merely myself

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    .:The Topical Guru:. Trema's Avatar
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    yeah man

    ^^^los thats cómo es usted saben lo que significo a muchacho casero.

    Dats da way it is and gud u kept yo shit true, i like dis. but kuz you need to hit up sum multi's and metaphors and simily's in dis make it deep,let shit bleed from ya heart! piece
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