10 lines
due before 4/19
goodluck.
Da Sick One
th-C
10 lines
due before 4/19
goodluck.
Iight Good Luck...
I Come Up With Sharp Punches, Its Like Boxing Edward Scissorhands
Im Coming At You With My Mic Cocked, I Stay In The Killers Stance
If You Think That Youre Hot, Ill Put An Ice Pack On Your Forhead
Bullets Flying To Yo Gut And Yo Chest, Ill Fuckin' Leave This Whore Dead
Lame...he Has Cyber Sex On America Online (he Has Aim Chat)
My Spit Is Hard, Nigga My Shit Is Better Than Yo Lines
This Is A Knock Out, Shit I Should Call My "mic" Tyson (mike Tyson)
I Kill All Bitches When I Spit, To Tell The Truth I Aint Even Tryin'
Im A Nasty Killa, Ill Fuckin' Send Bullets To Where Yo Balls Be
Just So I Can See Yo Fuckin' Guts Hang Low Like Tall Tees (re Amped)
da sick one i liked ya freestyle
u had good punches
i liked bar 4...................the mic tyson part
it was hot
if i could vote u got mine
yo hit up my battlez iight
me vs johan B
Da Sick One, what a name kid, you can't be more original..
^that had sarcasm...when I say your wack, I'm being critical..
what's this man about? take the punishment Ima hand out..
Just Because You Cap Every Word Don't Mean it Stand Out..
dam, wow.. what upon yourself allows you to write terribly..
you winning can't happen like a bumbling man with dexterity..
using tyson punches, makeveli and 50 cent quotes in ya sig..
typical newb that'll be feelin me.. little too close to my dick..
since my skill is clear to be better, I know the truth will define..
I don't know what i'm wasting more.. Da Sick One or my time..
your both pretty bad if i could vote it would
go to sick one but th-c is right about using
the great late pacs lines he needs to find his
own in his pea brain
In My Pea Brain...what The Hell??? Whatever Home Boy,voters
yo lets get to this. da sick one. sum good flow and structure here. punches though. not too good. work on personals and work on making ur punches actually hit. keep elevatin homie. i see potential. th-c. not bad homie. good flow and structure. sum nice punches and personals. keep elevatin the both of u.
v/th-C can't vote but if i could. it'd be him for harder punches and personals.
Return the favor. check my battle in sig. u know wat to do. peace.
aight ima break it down make sure ya RTF and check my battle VS Dr. Seuss, vote fairly
Da SIck One:
I Come Up With Sharp Punches, Its Like Boxing Edward Scissorhands
Im Coming At You With My Mic Cocked, I Stay In The Killers Stance
- ok opener pretty played punchline
If You Think That Youre Hot, Ill Put An Ice Pack On Your Forhead
Bullets Flying To Yo Gut And Yo Chest, Ill Fuckin' Leave This Whore Dead
- weak
Lame...he Has Cyber Sex On America Online (he Has Aim Chat)
My Spit Is Hard, Nigga My Shit Is Better Than Yo Lines
- weak punchline
This Is A Knock Out, Shit I Should Call My "mic" Tyson (mike Tyson)
I Kill All Bitches When I Spit, To Tell The Truth I Aint Even Tryin'
- this was alrite best line yet
Im A Nasty Killa, Ill Fuckin' Send Bullets To Where Yo Balls Be
Just So I Can See Yo Fuckin' Guts Hang Low Like Tall Tees (re Amped)
- not feeling the closer, overall you didnt have many punches or personals but ya got good structure 5/10
th-C:
Da Sick One, what a name kid, you can't be more original..
^that had sarcasm...when I say your wack, I'm being critical..
- this was an ok opener nice wordplay
what's this man about? take the punishment Ima hand out..
Just Because You Cap Every Word Don't Mean it Stand Out..
- nice punchline a bit played but good rhymescheme
dam, wow.. what upon yourself allows you to write terribly..
you winning can't happen like a bumbling man with dexterity..
- this was good
using tyson punches, makeveli and 50 cent quotes in ya sig..
typical newb that'll be feelin me.. little too close to my dick..
- just fed but still a good line
since my skill is clear to be better, I know the truth will define..
I don't know what i'm wasting more.. Da Sick One or my time..
- haha nice closer, overall i was feeling your battle you had nice punches and personals
vote - th-C
check my battle against dr seuss, thanks
Thanks For Voting, Can A Nigga Get Some More Votes
Iight Good Luck...
I Come Up With Sharp Punches, Its Like Boxing Edward Scissorhands
Im Coming At You With My Mic Cocked, I Stay In The Killers Stance
Ok opener
If You Think That Youre Hot, Ill Put An Ice Pack On Your Forhead
Bullets Flying To Yo Gut And Yo Chest, Ill Fuckin' Leave This Whore Dead
kinda weak
Lame...he Has Cyber Sex On America Online (he Has Aim Chat)
My Spit Is Hard, Nigga My Shit Is Better Than Yo Lines
corny
This Is A Knock Out, Shit I Should Call My "mic" Tyson (mike Tyson)
I Kill All Bitches When I Spit, To Tell The Truth I Aint Even Tryin'
nice
Im A Nasty Killa, Ill Fuckin' Send Bullets To Where Yo Balls Be
Just So I Can See Yo Fuckin' Guts Hang Low Like Tall Tees (re Amped)
so-so ender
Da Sick One, what a name kid, you can't be more original..
^that had sarcasm...when I say your wack, I'm being critical..
ok opener
what's this man about? take the punishment Ima hand out..
Just Because You Cap Every Word Don't Mean it Stand Out..
ok
dam, wow.. what upon yourself allows you to write terribly..
you winning can't happen like a bumbling man with dexterity..
ok
using tyson punches, makeveli and 50 cent quotes in ya sig..
typical newb that'll be feelin me.. little too close to my dick..
good one
since my skill is clear to be better, I know the truth will define..
I don't know what i'm wasting more.. Da Sick One or my time..
alright finisher
THC took this one, better vocab and better flow.
V/Th-c
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up number one...............................................
th-C- good punches bro and nice flow 7/10
da sick one-- it was ight but some of it didnt rhyme when it was supposta 5/10
v/ th-C
th C merked u man that is all there is to say to it
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