you keep calling out so i responded, probablly should battle someone my own level but.
25 linez or less
house ruelz
due in 30 afta check in
spit first.
nbny003
~G~
you keep calling out so i responded, probablly should battle someone my own level but.
25 linez or less
house ruelz
due in 30 afta check in
spit first.
I Told You U Never Respondedso I Set Battles Up With Other People
wtf.. don't make me waste 3 credits just spit.
since your online.....and i know your reading this. ill spit first in 10 min. since you have to cry about it and then if you don't spit in 3 hours i win. (because i know you will run away bitch)
yo G how do u make ya own avatar
please someone tell me he isnt trying/
i could getta betta battle from a dislexic viking/
im laughing at your lyrics so bad im crying/
i dont wanna turn this battle into physical fighting/
i just find your lyrics very UN-frightning/
i decide to place your arse omong the obserd/
coz when you rap i joke about every single word/
your cocky arse is as common as a dogs terd/
dont put a puzzled face on when the crowd smirk/
dont think your phoney raps can jump start a career/
well he beat these chumps but now im here/
he can sit front seat while i steer, get ya self into gear/
fuck you chump, your a common piece of trash/
thinking you can rap? your rhymes are mash/
just cos you dosnt mean you can whip my arse/
hey, grab the mic and practice a while/
im gunna turn away and walk away with a great smile/
if you become professional il walk 10000 mile/
hey, spit its your turn fuker/
i can tell that your online nbny003 you have 3 hours then battle is closed bitch. and i win.
listen up your fate equals tragedy,you been savin your srategies/
i bet you spent your intire life waiten to battle me/
keepin your best lines a punches just to test me/
ill beet the shit outa your heart/
to bust your chest piece/
nbny drops dimes but for you ill drop a quater/
ill run cicles around you and still have you cornerd/
g's tko now thats outa the way/
your ass is already in deep water/
and you still about to get sprayed/
ill cut off your ankels and put them behind u with speed/
then push u backwords so u can realy land on your feet/
swallow defeat,you probably didnt catch the last lines/
ill push california into the pacific/
just to win by a landslide
iight nbny u wasent all that bad betta then ive seen be4 structure was nice and flow
G same wit u u had go0d structure and flow to
the only thing is u had betta punches
close battle tho but ima go wit
G
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G my vote goes to u
good start off
uppin 2 need 3 more votez.
G i no you will win this
check out this battle: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=186360
and my other ones
^battle ain't over yet coco
uppin for votez
v/G
he had betta punches and a more effective flow. U need ta wrk on sum fresher rhymes and betta vocab thogh. Make sure that u include a whole lot more personals and metas to make ur shit betta. Also make sure that ur pnches really hit ur opponent harder. Ur verse was Iight but it cuda been a whole lot betta if u added sum betta punches n personals.
overall:7/10
nbny003- u really need ta elevate cuz i wasnt feelin ur verse.
ur opener was OK but it cuda been lot betta
dont rhyme words like me and me
wrk on longer lines and make ur shit flow beta
also keep fresh vocab n rhymes in ur verses
make ur shit original and tyte
make sure ta put hard hittin punches nad a lot of metas in ur verse
also wrk on beta personals and nicer rhymes and flow
overall:6/10
v/~g~ b/c his flow was beta and his rhymes and punches hit harder than nbny003's.
Da Rhymes I Spit Make Niggaz Disappear Like Magic!
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Da Rhythmagician's Battles - Battle Record (7-1) (7 K.O's)
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^^ good judge
uppin 3 votez need 2 more.
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