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  1. April 4th, 2005, 01:03 AM #16
    RJSGN
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    yo uppin this.....................................
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  2. April 4th, 2005, 01:33 AM #17
    Kraven Moorhead
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    You had a decent flow man
    you chould elevate a bit better but it was okay
    props
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  3. April 5th, 2005, 04:38 PM #18
    RJSGN
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    ight yo....uppin...................................
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  4. April 15th, 2005, 08:31 AM #19
    RJSGN
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    wow havent upped any of this so heres my upp....pce
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  5. April 16th, 2005, 03:38 PM #20
    aemeth
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    not bad, i seemed to have a problem catching the flow at times, and some rhymes were off (raputre/scripture/future doesnt work, they are words that need to be rhymed both parts..), but it was an alright piece..

    work on makin' it a little easier to read and just going insane with multies..download a song called "So Sick" by Benefit (if you havent heard it already) to see what I mean about just exploding with rhymes (if thats what you are trying to do)..

    but for just off the top of your head, it was pretty good..
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