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    My Gun

    HOOK
    My gun and me
    We be just like family
    my gun and me
    we gonna pop a hole through ur artery
    my gun and me
    nobodys ever stopped us and nobody will
    my gun and me better not piss us off or ur bound to get killed

    Better be cautious cuase im hot on the streeets
    me and my pal will knock u right of ur feet
    at first glance ull prolly think nothin of me
    think u could get some extra cash and a nice leather coat
    but the only thing ill give u is a bullet to the throat
    that way u cant bitch about every little thing
    someone stole my weed my hoe and givin me wat i need
    well im gonna do ur hoe and ur family a big help
    by shuttin yo ass up with a hit above the belt
    ill even pay for ur fuckin coffin
    cause when i kill u im gonna steal ur fortune

    HOOK

    got a 9 milli on the left and uzi on the right
    i aint scared of u in any sort of fight
    my guns take care of me and i take care of them
    just like a brother and his mother takin care of their old father
    whos gonna die anyway so why even bother
    kinda like me and u gettin in a fight
    why even try when u know ur gonna die
    i have u on ur knees beggin please
    askin for u life offerin me money
    the only thing i want is u six feet under ground
    in some obscure place where u wont be found
    the world will be better with u not around
    ur girl will be better with me fuckin her like a hound

    HOOK

    all the police wish to arrest me and gangs wanna kill me
    callin me a murderer criminal and asshole
    but i see myself as a superheroe
    bulletproof vest as my cute little suit
    gun in each hand is the way i do it
    now u see the way i roll
    come over here and try to fuck with this asshole
    i may not have very many friends by my side
    but i got one in each hand and that is just fine
    because my fingers on the trigger and the targets aimed at you
    so u better run for cover ill give u the count of five
    before i pull the trigger and end ur life

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  3. #3
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    uppin for feedback plz

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    thanx man uppin for more feedback i liked urs dawg

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    you need to up your vocab something rotten, this was some basic vocab man. the second thing was the topic, it's played out whether you really do it or not. you should pick something more original to keep people reading. multi's would help the flow as well.

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