matter fact just ban me I'll take it like that
before you punk me into to finding some one to agree with
me bout if my rap was ok or not on that you can stop(4 real)
matter fact just ban me I'll take it like that
before you punk me into to finding some one to agree with
me bout if my rap was ok or not on that you can stop(4 real)
^ Or you can agree to play nice with laurate and let him show you a few things about elevated writing. I don't want to ban a possible soild member, but I will not sit here and have you act a fool either. Choice is yours, accept some help from him, or deal with it your way. I would rather not ban you.
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nuff with the tuff talk
I'll agree peace
Good move man, no one wants to deal with BS, so I am glad you decided to take some pointers from him. No hate man, just being real, you will see what I mean and hopefully do the same for someone down the road.
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i agree with lyrics first post. in all honesty you need a lot of work. it just takes time. it looks like you just started out. take lyrics advice and use his knowledge. it will only make you better. and if you are gangsta like you claim to be there is nothing wrong with also being able to write like a true poet. you can be tuff on the streets and also be a very good artist. do not let being hard disturb your writing. be willing to take advice and critique they will only help you.
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i from Marcy what u know?
on the net no one cares how hard u r ... if ur hard be hard were it counts dont bring it here...ur piece wasn't terrible but it wasnt good neither...u need to elevate ur flow and scheme and get some betta topics happenin...other then that i agree with wot already been said...
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