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    AJ Diablo
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    luv is fo life cherish it

    fo once it a topical bout luv from tha heart

    yo behind every great rappa there's a betta girl
    give this topical a whirl

    i see things clearer than what i did be'fo
    shes my angel she aint no ho
    she is a gem she rarer than a pearl
    she is my greatest girl
    she is my inspiration and she gets me in a psych
    and to reward her dedication for her ima rocking tha mic
    and if i died it would break her heart so much
    but i aint scared cuz all i got is haters wit a soft touch
    when i spit tha mic i aint wearin flak
    cuz that shit just hurts my back
    and i got a weakness everyman does but mines is under my chest
    its so deep its reached into my heart right under my vest
    i have asthma attacks every time i hear her speak
    i luv the way she moans when she reaches her peak
    cuz i do anythin for her
    wateva occur
    doesn't matter if she right or wrong
    cuz this luv is too damn strong

    dedicated to fio cuz she feels naw
    and 2 all the rappers treatin fine girls wit respect. they deserve it

  2. #2
    .Xtenkae.
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    It Was Aiight It Couldve Been Alot Better But Just Work On Ur Elevating And Ull Be Dope

  3. #3
    AJ Diablo
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    word thx bro ill keep in on track

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    i liked the topic but i think your vocab needs some hard work man. you should try and use multis and equalise your bar lengths for a better flow as well.

    keep elavating.

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