Freestyle...Str8 Skillz...

[Sonz Of God]

weak ones seekin 2 devour me, i lyrical incinerate they excrements...
belligerent when flowin hard, Heaven Sent, i manifested excellence...
intellegence...weak emcees spit soft shot wit no relevance...
2 the topic and the present time of the tension, they lack elegance...
i, the opposite factor, of these joke of aspiring rappers...
leave they :Sweet Residue: thru my actionz like those of a bubble gum wrapper...
posing actors...you :Tread My Grounds: like fields of :Tractor:...
trailers on duty, and like :Non-Existant Objects: ur flow lacks :Matter:...
i expect these idiots distinguishin me...allegience 2 me...
cuz ur :Loses Result In No Profit: like a :Contigency Fee:...

lol...just a lil something I came up with...how do u like it? holla at me

[Sonz Of God]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184732

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184675

[Sonz Of God]

feed up please ya'll, dont sleep...

[warchild]

This was decent the vocab was good but i think you were just putting the big words in there cause you think that makes the best mcs or writers.
The structure was ok but the flow was weak the last 2 lines flowed well but the rest were weak. Overall a decent piece but try and use your vocab better.

Return the favour.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=184935

[AJ Diablo]

yeah word dat. yo gotta play wit emotions as well git tha fear in they head yo know wat ima sayin? holla back if ya want

[Sonz Of God]

holla, thankz for the feed...