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Thread: Damned Perfection

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    Damned Perfection

    Damned Perfection



    The topic is relevant from the start…essential only to the open spirit and mind,
    A servant of true heart,lonely in a dimension of art where true lyrics are combined,
    Words spoken before their time…a token to the apotheosis he himself redefined,
    Metamorphosis on his rhymes every line with a divine passion for intensive torment,
    Expressing with his own blood and pain,his love for the bane flowing in a torrent
    inside his veins…Creative current storming his brain, deforming space like cocaine...
    He is just what there isn’t…perfection with a reason…a reflection of the enigmatic,
    Imprison words in the orbit of a morbid static…the mathematical ovule of nothing,
    In his cursed rule he’s an erratic…Scavenging on his undigested thoughts of a vatic,
    Ravaging his excellence infested thoughts like a pestilence from the dark ages,
    Mental opulence rephrased in sentimental cages as a loophole from perfect hypostasis,
    But bounces like a hyperbole from fate’s protected pages…A dejected humble slave,
    Sequential damned to eternally pave at every creation the precedential’s one grave,
    To crave for a foolish mind…To wish for ears that are deft and eyes that are blind,
    To bind magical words for the years he has left, To forever apotheosize his design…
    Captive in a vicious circle of creativity, viciously adapting inanity into something,
    Thoughts rotting from nothing into geniality as a result of the mould of divinity,
    Slowly departing into the metaphysics of lyrics, forever trembling his own past,
    A lonely and damned spirit…knowing no ending,he forever must surpass his last…
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    I'ma call u sokrates or some like that from now on....man this sounds philosophical...it was hard fro me to even know what you are talkin' about...still this was good cuz u managed to rhyme even the toughest words....vocab was over the top....good ish holmes
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    was i really suppose to read all that. No I rather look at Berlins Best ass thumbnaill....mmmm i would bite it...

    nah anyway i read some, and i agree with Berlin, you are sounding very philosophical.

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    Extrovert. Up. Fuck. The. Shut.

    Once again man you came stronger than almost everybody else on the site in my opinion. Baron was saying to me to keep my lines short and tone down the number of syllables, but this piece proves what I would like my pieces to do... You express using the words you use so perfectly, you create pieces like this that include good emotion and imagery, and with words that are simple but taken from such a vast vocabulary. This was some deep nice shit man, i love reading you stuff... Keep bringing them like this and Hit N Run will soon be running things... Yessir!

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    i dug the concept and its execution man, some great images and otherworldy shit going on in this. i thought your lines were overstretched but the content and the vocab more than made up for it.

    good work fam, uppin this^^

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    Thx for the feeds fams...Always can count on you...
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    that was some ice dope shit man i was really loving that man good job.

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    dope concept......it was confusin fo me...but maybe that was the concept......good shit overall..

    keep reppin....

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    ya make anotha one i would love to hear it .

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    Thx for the feeds so far...
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    Shyt was trippn but you held it together

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    nice flow and good vocab just work on word structure ok homie but everythin else is ok good job homie keep up tha good work give ur verse 8.0/10

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    ^did u at least read it?
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    thiz was a nice drop, yo u had alotta fuckin vocab n dere, some nice multiz, u gotta really pay attention 2 da linez 2 get what he talkin bout nice drop yo

    peep ma shit "imma lyrical menace"
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