yo uppin this.....................................
yo uppin this.....................................
You had a decent flow man
you chould elevate a bit better but it was okay
props
ight yo....uppin...................................
wow havent upped any of this so heres my upp....pce
not bad, i seemed to have a problem catching the flow at times, and some rhymes were off (raputre/scripture/future doesnt work, they are words that need to be rhymed both parts..), but it was an alright piece..
work on makin' it a little easier to read and just going insane with multies..download a song called "So Sick" by Benefit (if you havent heard it already) to see what I mean about just exploding with rhymes (if thats what you are trying to do)..
but for just off the top of your head, it was pretty good..
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