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Thread: Just flowin whatever...

  1. #1

    First Open Mic Ever....More to come....

    I'll kill your parents and give you the horrible news/
    cuz I got nuthin more to do/
    BUt your too poor to afford whats in store for you/
    I'll get into your mind, like a head surgeon/
    And leave you stiffer than chris reeves...the dead version/
    I'll rob you so fast you wont have time to pronounce the sketch up/
    And leave you broker than me fartin out the last ounce of ketchup/
    Imma be the best rapper alive/
    After I stalk the Top 100 and snipe half of the guys/
    Cuz i'll rip your rhyme book, crap on your lines
    Tie a phone chord around your head, tap in your mind
    And steel every punch you ever wrote while you laughin at mine/
    My rhymes are just a little long from decency/
    I wouldn't know your name if you had the strongest beef with me/
    Imma keep taking breaths, as long as people breathe/
    How could you sell albums, they wont even download your songs illegally/
    Im deprived of sleep and half the time my heads twisted/
    So dont be surprised when your robbed and only your beds missing/
    You think your fire, you trying to light the rawest log/
    Cuz you wouldn't get hip hop if you bought a frog/
    Im harder to escape from than a prison guarder/
    And if you dont hear me
    I'll sew your girl on your dick, so you could listen harder/
    Rappin consumes time, I'm already puttin off tomorow's duties/
    But I stand up to you and never run, like killers in horror movies/

    Links:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...72#post2247972
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...98#post2247998
    Last edited by LyFeM0dE; April 3rd, 2005 at 04:01 PM Reason: First Open Mic Ever....more tro come

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    lol. hilarious man. some really great punches.

    "Tie a phone chord around your head, tap in your mind" //haha, phone tap, oh shit! lol.

    "Im deprived of sleep and half the time my heads twisted/
    So dont be surprised when your robbed and only your beds missing/"
    awesome. i felt that one. sleeping on the floor isn't too bad though...

    "You think your fire, you trying to light the rawest log/
    Cuz you wouldn't get hip hop if you bought a frog/"
    lame and great at the same time - log and frog are weak rhymes, but you put good punches there too, so it's aight.

    "I'll sew your girl on your dick, so you could listen harder" //brings a messed-up image to mind, haha

    overall, good job. ok flow, good punches, good job.

    feedback:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182819
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182821

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