word its weirdness honestly not your best shit IMO. not really feeling it as much as some of your other stuff i dont even know what your saying
word its weirdness honestly not your best shit IMO. not really feeling it as much as some of your other stuff i dont even know what your saying
aight lets see if this work heres the song
We Crunk
Sicc One, Me, Caster, J Rod, and Young P all in order
[music]http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2267650&q=Hi[/music]
YEE YEE!
i thought it was good, i liked the flow and emotion, the content was lyrically good... if you wanna collab sometime get back at me..
peace.
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LMAO...Seriously Yall..Its Not Like Im A Fucking Strange Beingg...This Shit Is Understandable If You Listen....Maybe Its Me...Maybe It Is "Abstract" Iono...Just How I Felt At The Time..What I Was Sayin First First Was How I Felt About The Violence In Rap...Second Verse Is About Me Having Violent Thoughts....
Yeah Though...Mixtape Coming Soon..This Will Prolly Be Re Recorded..
Jesus Loves You
Skeez is my hero
i love how everything you do is so diffrent.. i dont think its necesarily "abstract" except the effect (iont think any of them have cool edit or somethin)
the delivery makes it so good, lyrically it was koo, but if it was just spit in a conventional way, then it wouldnt be half as good
lovin the whole thing
~*~ Droppin mediocre shit on RB since 2001 ~*~
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Aesthetic Values.
If you don't know what it means, Fuck You.
aight ... starting is like siren effect then the verse comes in .. the beat is very nice for sure the lyrics are good the song is really kinda fucked up ... um the chorus is pretty good to me ..yea Nice style unique and shit aight good track pz out ...
INSANE JOKA LYRICIST
overall a decent track
flow was eh
emotion wasnt bad
could be better but ur on the right track man
stayy up
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thats fukin quality
me do like...
good to hear summit different for once...
good topic, covered it well
lyrics were nice
flow was good
effects were excellent...
really good listen man
sick track
JAY FIORZ
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ENGLISH TILL DEATH DO US PART
Beginning is weird, that back and forth shit...makin me feel like im dizzy...
Beat is ok...
Flow is nice on this joint...
Lyrics is nice, feeling it...
Delivery is on point...
Presence is there...
Chorus is decent...nothin catchy but still nice...
Your voice fits this beat well...
That weird effect again, that shit is mad annoying...
Quality is on point on this track...
Overall this was a decent drop homie...keep doin you...
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It was oooooooooooook nothing great btu stil solid the start did have me wierded a bit though
but it was pretty slick at the end
keep em coming
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*listens*
Hmm... that doppler effect is coo the first 2-3 times it went through, maybe cut that shorter cuz stuff gets annoying hella quick. That beat is funky as hell tho!! I'm diggin that shiet... sounds like its on some videogame Metroid tip or somethin... dope tho. Verse comes in nice. Nice emotion and delivery wit whatever it is you sayin. I mean, stuff is audible... but I just can't follow with what you talkin about. Chorus is aight, not as much emotion dropped on it as the verses, but it still comes aight. Second verse matches 1st on emtion and delivery, but I still can't follow you on them lyrics homie. Overall, the track is coo. Beat and delivery make up for a lack of understandin content. Could use some improvements here and there.... maybe get a bit more topical wit dem lyrics, iunno. But yeah, track is aight. Keep doin it. I'd definitely say this trtack is worth a redo. Stay up.
-V-
this been hot
cant wait till they hear you on my beats
woooooooooo
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New Writejist Song - Tito Ortiz
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This was wierd, but I loved it, your voice does sound a bit like Kanye Wests. The beat was dope, and your lyrics were there to match it. The effects were awsome, I loved this song, and I'm glad it's featured.
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the inro is coo..but drags on after a bit...i aint feelin the beat at all...your voice is coo..lyrically its decent...you on beat for the most part...aint really feelin the hook...i think u got a lil carried away wid the effects man...this was a nice listen, wud b dope wid some polishing here and there..
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