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Thread: N~E~V~A [HnR family collaboration ( J6F & DrztiC ) deadly sick]

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    N~E~V~A [HnR family collaboration ( J6F & DrztiC ) deadly sick]

    Hook:
    You neva witnessed a gun fight
    Only thing u fought with was food at lunch-time
    Neva got punched right
    Neva popped the trunk when it was crunch time


    DrztiC:
    U say u the doctor of punchlines but u sound like U need medical help
    Claim u bout to change the game and make radicals melt
    Things ain’t the same U only heavyweight cuz u train with a eadible belt
    Sell out? Nah, never gone sell none but ya sellable self
    I catch u jackin’ about the green mile and cell level twelve
    Bout how u escaped death like the dare devil himself
    You a rare rebel that’s felt across the whole country
    Still I see u cross dressin’ all funky, dancin’ to country
    Say u need space when u grumpy cuz u about to spass out
    Go all out with ya ass out, threaten fagz to get they cash out
    U get an insane flash now......take a deep breather
    Claim you a Don when u really a sweet Diva......


    J6F:
    let me swing the meat cleaver at these terminal herbs
    trying to brag when they're slurring their words, the vermin of verbs!
    i got enough 'patience' for a 'half a pack of cards'
    and the rest is blown away when these dicks are rapping hard
    you get battle scarred, scattered to a million fragments
    when hit n run 'casts a line' you get caught in the 'drag net'
    pulled to land and pummeled til your gills give out
    crushing good times and rushed that your pills give out
    you're deluded, self-involved and can't realise the truth
    you'll never climb the roof with plastic fucking troops
    so when it comes the crunch time, prepare your punchlines
    because the show, your self respect and the money is all mine!


    Hook:

    You neva witnessed a gun fight
    Only thing u fought with was food at lunch-time
    Neva got punched right
    Neva popped the trunk when it was crunch time


    DrztiC:

    Dropped a bunch o rhymes and tried to gain respect in rap
    But all u gained were rejects cuz u reflect what’s wack
    Wouldn’t be considered a mac...with a gat in hand
    I’d slap this man but I’m afraid to brake my wrist floss
    Neva original this bitch’s still bitin’ lines from Kriss Kross
    Neva stopped jumpin’ but when it stopped thumpin’ he got pissed off
    Now I hear you fly like a rocket....but u musta missed to lift off
    That’s pretty much the jist off this joint, u can lick the piss off a coin
    Don’t come to shake my hand cuz I’ll twist ya wrist off it’s joint
    You only disappoint, you a pointless bitch with no choice
    Say u talk thug but when I hit the switch of this clip........
    ..........................................it change the pitch of yo voice..........haha...that’s what’s up......finish em Johnny.......


    J6F:

    Call me a herbivore on steriods, chasing after the geeks
    They crapped in their sheets and got blasted for weeks
    While we're classic, unique, about ready to blow
    And steadily flow down the Nile with henny and 'dro
    Getting elavated while elavating, while other's debating
    About starting relations when our squad's proclamating
    I've got no time for losers, i'm circuling mercury
    Meditating on philosophies and the word in me
    If you had aint the training, you get you brains caved in
    Get a stamp on your arse 'taiwan' when you were made in
    Throw a grenade in your jockstrap and run for cover
    Duck the explosion, then go in and fuck your lover


    Hook:
    You neva witnessed a gun fight
    Only thing u fought with was food at lunch-time
    Neva got punched right
    Neva popped the trunk when it was crunch time


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    Tight drop
    your flow was on and it was a good collab
    the hook was kinda weak but you backed it up
    with your flows
    drop more stuff like this
    props
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    Originally Posted by Murkage
    lol..im loving this

    serves you right for fucking wit me slide, and i did nothing to you....
    i am a nice guy serious..

    and i think your maturity level is 000000.1 after this eminem incident..
    and you were dissing my audios lol.....the nerve of this bitch
    well ive reported you..you will be banned..
    now fuck off!
    Aw shit this guy has dirt on you! dont fuck wit him!

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    show this piece some love...it def deserves it...HoF....ahem
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    no doubt this was a pretty ill peace fam
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    good drop fam this was good the second verse is my fav. are you two gonna make this audio when j6f gets his comp and mic. u 2 should. nice drop.
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    the hook was nothing special, but it fits this topic i guess

    DrztiC: flow was on point in both verses, you had some more of that witty/wordplay type verses, was likin it alot.. structure was decent..seen a good amount of multis.. there was no real WOW stand-out lines, but their were some decent lines.. you came pretty good and creative in your verses... nice drop

    J6F: flow was definitely good in this, multis were all there wich supported your flow alot...you also had some decent wordplay in this, made it a much better read.. structure was ok, vocab was a meh with you but its all good, flow made up for that.. but word, you came good.. nice drop


    this was a good collab, both of your styles fit well together.. i enjoyed both of you, to hard to pick a favourite.. i dunno about the hook, wasnt really likin that, but that doesnt change anything about your verses... you both came dope, hope to see more!

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    thank y'all for the luv....plus once again good stuff Johnny....pz
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    Heh this was long...

    Hook
    Meh... This could've been better.

    DrztiC
    You did well... You had decent flow and some good multies which helped you out. Some of your verses were creative and hard hitting but they weren't as good as they could've been. Rather than rapping to represent your crew it seems like you're dissing someone... and not being that successful. If this is all about your crew then you should mention HnR in it and make some clever boasts about it.

    J6F
    This was a better verse than Drztic's but it still wasn't your best. I've seen you write good OM pieces, I'm just not sure about this. It became a little more clear what you are both rapping about in this, which made life a little easier. You were more creative and hard hitting overall. You used better vocabulary which helped you out too. You maintained a good flow and had a few multies which always helps too.

    This was an ok collab... It could've been better. You two worked well together though... Had some decent moments.

    If you could check out "Tears of the World" in my sig I'd appreciate it.

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    really nice fams...your verses fitted good togheter.i think this will sound good in audio if you plan do one.all your verses had good flaw was on point,as same with your message,good wordplay(especially johnny).vocab was also on point and what i like the most about this is the way you transmitted your message...just so tight...the only downside i see to this is that is long and people will kinda sleep on it(or give feed without reading it)...Good one fams!

    check out "Battlefield" in my sig.My third OM in three days...
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    yea thx for the feed y'all we appreciate that.....now the rest don't sleep on this...it's worth a peep...pz
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    woot! lot of replies... umm... relatively speaking. the collab turned out nice man, always a pleasure to work with you sir.

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    Sick Drop HNR fam....Sick as fuck.... shit this is gunna make me step my shit up even more...much props...one love keep dropin good shit....

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    yet up again....pz
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