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Thread: a million strong fight for the weak (feat. na~ledge)

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    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
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    a million strong fight for the weak (feat. na~ledge)

    noncentz
    I pledge allegiance to my fucking self only concearned with my health.
    The cards I been delt so seeing innocent soldiers die is the only pain I felt.
    Why fuck with the president he already a bush/
    That takes advantage of power with nuclear warhead buttons to push.
    His collegents want a nuclear season with global warming
    And poverty swarming and illuminattis theory of a new world dawning.
    What we created unfoils we paved the path to turmoil
    How we share chemical weapons with a country that can share oil
    How we share funds when we broke caught in the gun shot recoils.
    We already in hell this country has a 6 sence that don’t know we fell.
    we were better off with the first pussy and dick that couldnt spell.
    Create a man made virus have the fbi market it to the lifeless
    Wait for popular demand then declair it a crisis.
    Love is ment to be equal but if you aitn one of they people
    They relocated to feeble concentration camps
    surrounded by poverty and needles
    Creating a chain of life each generations a sequel
    Call them savages they aint blessed by your church steeples.
    Shits getting old to the point it fossilizes steadily
    And fuck our government the bigger threat is history as an enemy
    Cause it repeats itself redundant with continuos rebuddles
    Bath in vistory but the only liquid is boiling blood puddles
    as the heat cerates flood bubbles……
    keep feeding lies but don’t expect me to be humble.
    Fuck your religion fuck your communions
    Fuck yiour solutions and god I want retribution for the constitution.
    Lead the Indians to trail of tears for your stature
    Thinking we stupid? Aids wasn’t a weapon till it was manufactured.

    na~Ledge

    I pledge allengience? Oh contrar, I scream in defient tones
    Mourning the loss of a country Americans once owned
    Cause know it seems the Four Fathers dream was overthrown
    By the Bush regime, and a whole team of political drones
    Minds honed in on the pursuit of our national devestation
    Look how Presedent Irrelevent handled the previous situation
    Intentional manipulation won a fraud the election in his first term
    Lame duck president till terrorist made Manhhatten burn
    Then dude used 9/11 to gain favor with the public opinion
    Spinnin the truth in his favor, an u patrotic fucks listened
    To his Bushshit tyrades blaming Bin Laden for America's pain
    Saw an oppertunity for revenge as well as material gain
    Put out false reports to sway the public into shifting the blame
    To Saddam Hussian with ludacris wepons of mass destruction claims
    Used his fame to gain votes to pass legestlation to issue a response
    To drop bombs in Iraq, creating a new mellinium Vietnam
    Sending my friends and family members over there to go help
    In a cause disguised to cover up it's true concern, your wealth
    And this it with whom you fools choose to place your faith
    Well good-fuckin-luck, I'm moving to Canada, somewhere safe
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    good collab fams!this topic has been played many times,but you've played it the best from what i've read till no on this.as i was reading i noticed you've put a lotta emotions filled with anger,frustration...and i was able to feel that because you emphasized the feeling very well.i liked you've touched a lot of issues,a great amount of info came out from you're two verses.this was just raw fams!liked that you've both started with:"I pledge allegiance" but then continued with your own ideas.I really liked Na's ending,funny but ironic.Keep it up fams!
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    thanks hermano stay up and hit me for collab
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    word on an ill verse Word~P. nice

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    uppin this

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    a solid (although played) topic that was well executed. your vocab was strong and you made some good point (i enjoy anti-bush pieces as muhc as the next man). good imagery and blending of styles from you two.

    keep reppin us right!
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    Dope verse yall i liked it strutture was good even tho it dont matter but o well lol flow tight easy to read and i liked it a lot...yea this topic has been played out the ass lol but you guys defently made the best out of it i like it keep it up yall ~1~

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    thanks and upping
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    very nice na you are elevating like crazy. and yes i love pieces like this i dont care if the topic is played. they still get me every time. especailly this one. we are the coolest crew ever.
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    Nice vocab and it made some points I guess.
    I dont know what else to say,but yeah this was really good.

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    Good drop, liked Na's ending.

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    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    first off i know everyone else has said this but this topic is very played...although i enjoyed the simplicity of this piece while at the same time you came across many perspectives of the topic....

    noncentz...

    Create a man made virus have the fbi market it to the lifeless
    Wait for popular demand then declair it a crisis.
    Love is ment to be equal but if you aitn one of they people
    They relocated to feeble concentration camps
    surrounded by poverty and needles

    these lines stood out to me the most...nice points made here...i wasnt too fond of your structure but non the less it flowed decent

    na ledge...

    Cause know it seems the Four Fathers dream was overthrown
    By the Bush regime, and a whole team of political drones
    Minds honed in on the pursuit of our national devestation
    Look how Presedent Irrelevent handled the previous situation

    very nice right here...i was feelin your structure and in my opinion you ended it very nice( and funny)...
    overall noncentz i give a 6.5/10 naledge i give 8.5/10
    decent collab keep droppin

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