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    love stained

    no one hears me screaming on the inside
    im an emotional wreck..with no where to hide
    self righteous acts got me in this position
    immaturity..put me in this current condition
    i can always smile but i cant stop the way i feel
    my own actions put me here..every bit is real
    i tried to keep u close but i pushed us apart
    times became harder n i slowly broke ur heart
    now things are over and im wishing us to be
    wishing gets me nowhere..when its only me
    im tryin to get you back..but thats a hard task
    cus i hav'nt the answer to the questions u ask
    so its obivously useless for me to try again....
    the consequences are seeing me swollow my pain
    a spec of hope wen u sed u love me..but is it true
    my mind says no..but my heart yearns for you
    i find it hard to belive that you feel this way
    although im captured by each word you say
    i cant help but feel your trying to deceive me
    cause if u truely felt this way why did u leave me

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    man i was feelin this, it flowed well and was a good subject , you had some dope lines it there for example
    "now things are over and im wishing us to be
    wishing gets me nowhere..when its only me"
    keep it up dawg

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    bump

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    yeah i liked it, u stayed on topic, and ya vocab and rhymes were str8, keep droppin yo
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    that shit was soft and i did'nt like it go to a pop web site if u want to sing some soft shit u a fag from england and your styl is wack its on crack and u propably take it in the ass for money, u can't fuk with KAUS why? BECAUSE IM BIG COMPANY

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    uppin

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    oook kaus cant see real talent... this board dont have to be all lik [fuck you ima put a bullet in your head! bitch!] it can also be a song lik this.. i liked it and kaus stop hatin on ppl in england at least they kno how to be real lyricists not idiots lik you..

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    cheerz IN....uppin

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    yo man that was deep for sure i was feelin that man like good job man like i give you props

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    this is ok.. nothing to mind blowing.. but you described your feeling well
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    uppin....

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    I think this joint was hot I rather listen to you rhyme about a girl then 50
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    Kaus be talkin bad about everything but hey he got his right to an opinion
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    Man I love cherry pie...dont u....

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    YO THAT WAS LIKE SOME REAL LL COOL J TYPE OF SHIT MY NIGG

    YOU MIGHT AS WELL MAKE A SINGLE WITH R-KELLY ...........ROFL

    NO HARD FEELINGS THOUGH SOME OF THAT A GET YOU SOME ASS

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