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Thread: Is this real enough?

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    Newbie dAmEtApHoR's Avatar
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    Is this real enough?

    is it real enuf for a little 5 year old/
    grab a nine at school and kill a 9 year old?
    ask what messege you saw on 106 and park today/
    niggas runnin' round glorify guns in every way...
    cuz in tha town a gloc is like a lolly pop,
    packin while you on the corner sellin lil susie that rock.
    what happened makin changes? like pac said/
    try to clean the east side up niggas end up dead?
    oh but all the sudden we care about the ghetto in life?
    bush tryin to stop cryps and bloodz with his martha stewart lookin wife?
    that's a hands on approach if I done seen one,
    bring her to the bay like that she be layin with Big Pun/
    we should be so lucky be like "we so glad to see you!"
    when the oakland city police wont even bring that ass through!
    problems in the murder dubs they so secondary,
    but marty and ken get jumped in danville that's necessary.
    fuck that we gotta do it alone,
    but a nigga still claim thug life even when he grown.
    d light on the block is the only inspirational figua
    what about Andre with a degree?
    that's a degree he aint no nigga........

    That's the story in East Oakland...this is not a spit glorifying it, it's the truth. There needs to be a change. Last summer Oakland had more murders than any other city in the country and niggas are runnin' around braggin'? Brag to those families and loved ones...who will step up?

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...12#post2231812

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...02#post2231802

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    Whoa
    thats deep man.....thats real too....props man on that
    theres not to much deep stuff around here
    glad to see some stuff like yours
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    Originally Posted by Murkage
    lol..im loving this

    serves you right for fucking wit me slide, and i did nothing to you....
    i am a nice guy serious..

    and i think your maturity level is 000000.1 after this eminem incident..
    and you were dissing my audios lol.....the nerve of this bitch
    well ive reported you..you will be banned..
    now fuck off!
    Aw shit this guy has dirt on you! dont fuck wit him!

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    I liked this verse the topic was a real one and you got some good emotion out in the words your structure was ok you could up your vocab so you can describe your feelings better the flow wasnt there but it was a deep verse and you said what was on your mind and i respect that. Overall a good verse.

    Can you reply to these:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=180994
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=182306

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    Good Lookin' y'all I'll check ya verses

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