Mc Massacre (Comments Please)

[Brainz]

Me and you will never see eye to eye you aint on my level//
Imma pitbull mixed with a tazmanian Devil//
A rebel that'll make love to ya moms and never hurt her//
while you in the back of the room left for later... for murder//
I drink Gatorade before spit so my rhymes come out with extra energy//
Consider yourself added to the list of my enemies//
ahead of me never//
Think of this as a homicide letter//
Now Imma decide how to design ya skin for leather//
I spit leathal like buggz gettin sprayed with raid//
You no good like a coucasian in the hood with braidz//
Mc's are endangered species the last of the dieing breed//
The worst of the beast out of a cage I've been freed//
To kill wannabies that wannabe Mc's//
U see The rap game's gonna need surgery for the way it been scared//
With homies like you that think they can rap thus far//
Now you might have won a battle but dont get flattered//
Cuz God sent me to make sure ya rhymes get splattered//
It'll be a miracle if after me you still intact//
Even Stevie Wonder can see that you wack//
Now that the point got across you can chill alright//
If you need me to ghost write it'll be a delight//
Ight This keystyle is over//
You can't beat me even with you battled me holding a 3 leafed clover//


Sincerly, Brainz



http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146377
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[Sshhh]

nice, and fairly creative, yo. maybe i like it a little more complex, but that was pound, though.

[StuartStrange]

Nice, and the stevie wonder bit was funny, keep it up like Viagara!

[D.I.R.]

that was funny as fuck... but the content couldve been more complex and thought out..,. Keep it up tho revise it

[seth gecko]

haha yeh it was amusing i can picture some drunk cat freestyling that at a party or something maybe you need to work on your complexity and structure but it was ok i wouldn't exactly call it a massacre but then again neither was 50's album

[iNFiNiTE A]

tru tru it was amusing... lacked complexiety.. but overall it was hott

[Brainz]

Good Lookin I'm Working On it
No doubt thanks (to all)

[sheldon]

you didnt care what u said as long as it ryhmed huh.n-e ways keep writing and u will get beeter but this rap was a little on the whack side.

[Brainz]

LoL Everyone has aright to an opinion Thanks