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thanks for the feedback, keep it coming
both verses was hott....Sammy shyt was hott...flow was aiight...good werdplay...Carl ya shyt was nice too...flow was a bit off but itz gravy...but im feelen tha topc good shyt b...EZ
pretty good piece, some nice wordplay and vocab here.. Structure was a little off in both verses but thats not too much of a problem.. good emotion and consistency..
overall : 8/10
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It wuz Ok to me. More poetry, like u put some passion into it. Try using more of the basics, Multis etc.
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yall was allright together but im tryin to see the solo.NO HOMO
Good shit from the both, nice werdplay and shit and the flow was pretty good ...RTF
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yo tight stuff maybe a couple of lines were simple but shit was flowing 2 da end
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PHILLY stay up
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this was good but not much more then that. you need to work on your word choice. it seemed like you would say things assuming people had the same feeling as you. you cannot do that, you need to go into more detail and paint a picture so people do see it as you do instead of assuming they do. also work on putting in a few more multi's
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dude that shit was nice and everything was put together amazingly..
you appeal to the mums, dads, and kids out there,
But that's nothen, because im their fucken nightmare!
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Yea pretty good nice topic nice flow try taking it to the next level i think U good enuf well hit up my battle if anything im at frontlines 1
this was a nice colab... the flow could have been better, but nice vocab to get the concept across....
Sammy's verse was tight, Carl's verse picked up heat at the end. Props to the both of you, great topic- good use of words throughout.
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