12 lines .. drop within 20 minutes after battle is set up
KILLA E
REality
12 lines .. drop within 20 minutes after battle is set up
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yo you gonna drop bitch
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your not a real mc.. so lightweighted when i "punch" at you I feel tha breeze
this bitch is out of gas yall even his name says that this killas "E" (empty)
drill an squeeze every ounce of life out of you.. shit this herbs too wack
seriously I thought dr.seuss stopped rhyming till I heard you rap
your rhymes are a piece of crap.. I mean they ~sound too bitch~
dude your fuckin verses are like constipation..
cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~
you've got no concept of battling I mean this dude cant spawn strong types
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night
dont even recite cause dude your gonna get sparked
killa your lyrics are like retarded racers because their dumb from the start
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Yo my bad ill spit in a minut i went to go eat but im back bitch
U sayin that u callin me empty/
Cmon man REality check ur mom is havin my baby/
Have u spinnin around like tha revolver 3 80/
Nigga talks alot of shit but i can take yo lady/
Son u should know im a pimp/
one shot in yo leg will make u walk wit a limp/
and u wont clap back cuz u a wimp/
ill make yo head blow up like if u were a blimp/
Like yo name says u need to do it again/
Cuz tha RE is tha ality so ill come and hit u wit tha mack 10/
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
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your not a real mc.. so lightweighted when i "punch" at you I feel tha breeze
this bitch is out of gas yall even his name says that this killas "E" (empty)
drill an squeeze every ounce of life out of you.. shit this herbs too wack
seriously I thought dr.seuss stopped rhyming till I heard you rap
your rhymes are a piece of crap.. I mean they ~sound too bitch~
dude your fuckin verses are like constipation..
cause all your "forced drops" will never ~amount to shit~
you've got no concept of battling I mean this dude cant spawn strong types
he's so stupid his idea of throwing punchlines is flipping this juice stands on prom night
dont even recite cause dude your gonna get sparked
killa your lyrics are like retarded racers because their dumb from the start
not bad, but not good, id work on structure and content, yur flow aint bad, but again nothing special.
overall:4.5/10
U sayin that u callin me empty/
Cmon man REality check ur mom is havin my baby/
Have u spinnin around like tha revolver 3 80/
Nigga talks alot of shit but i can take yo lady/
Son u should know im a pimp/
one shot in yo leg will make u walk wit a limp/
and u wont clap back cuz u a wimp/
ill make yo head blow up like if u were a blimp/
Like yo name says u need to do it again/
Cuz tha RE is tha ality so ill come and hit u wit tha mack 10/
then ull be wishin why did i face him/
Son im tha boss like if i were thug slim/
WHAT THA FUCK was dat dawg? Dat sucked,dnt ever twist rappers names, like THUG SLIM, its SLim Thug and i kno wat u were goin for, and it didnt work. Flow, structure, conetent, punches, all need work dawg.
overall:2/10
WEAK ASS BATTLE but my vote will go to REality
v/reality
AY YO HIT UP SUM BATTLES IN MY SIG DAWG!! THANX
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
Hadez Paragon
Apoetic
MERKED
CUZ
MasterJ
Street_Play
Cracker
tha Yung1
Dolla Biggs
Dr.Spitfire
Young Don
Not By Design
Net Record: 13-3
that vote wasnt explained well enough.. im not even going to wste my time returning votes
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fine damn:
REality-Nice flow, but work on ur punches and word structure, if u do dat ull elevate. Juts wasnt feelin it too much tho, but ill give u vote b/c ur better than tha other guy,both need to elevate yall...
KIlla E- It sucked, u need to work on word strucute, flow, and everytihng else. Id try checkin out sum otha battles and learn form them. Sorry dawg but that verse was just wack....
Hadez Paragon
Apoetic
MERKED
CUZ
MasterJ
Street_Play
Cracker
tha Yung1
Dolla Biggs
Dr.Spitfire
Young Don
Not By Design
Net Record: 13-3
Yo thanx husla ill try to work on that shit it was just a battle i thought quick u know but if u want me to ill take a day and show u i can kill u and turn u from a husla to a busta BIATCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yeah i kno u was thinkin quick, dawg, and sumtime we can battle,hahahaahaha even tho its a waste of my time, but not now cuzz i cant open anymore battles yet...BIATCH!!!!hahahaahahahaha
Hadez Paragon
Apoetic
MERKED
CUZ
MasterJ
Street_Play
Cracker
tha Yung1
Dolla Biggs
Dr.Spitfire
Young Don
Not By Design
Net Record: 13-3
But i can motha fucka lets go u have three verse of 16 bars each to do and ill do tha same
all three verses will be due by this Friday rite b4 saturaday midnite
come and accept my challenge bitch nigga
OMG im gunna get banned for dis but o well, dis bitch shud b put in his place, GOD my fuckin ego.....
sorry for freepostin.....SET IT UP BITCH!
Hadez Paragon
Apoetic
MERKED
CUZ
MasterJ
Street_Play
Cracker
tha Yung1
Dolla Biggs
Dr.Spitfire
Young Don
Not By Design
Net Record: 13-3
Reality you had some really streached lines in there... but you had some decent punchs.... nothing amazing... not bad all around verse... defiatly enought to take teh win... just structure needs some work......
Killa - Your punches where lacking nothing really hit. No wit or anything... and your structure could use soe work too.... no originlity just an all around bleh verse... nothing really at all....
basically... killa droped lame... while reality droped decent...
vote - Reality
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