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    + Dreams of Stardum +

    You are an underground rapper on the verge of blowing up. What is your gimmick? What do you spit about? You only get one chance to make it... Creativity is key here.


    Having thoughts of making it big,.....While watching Pac Jay-Z and BIG
    Knew I would never see the 'lime light', even If I stocked crazy on brisk
    Everyday my hearts racing to quick, Always thinking bout getting signed
    Steaming down deep inside, I spit heavenly divine like Jesus is on the mic
    Every weakend I try to rhyme,.. Hoping that one day I'll be soon to blow
    Trying to boost my flow, I usually stay in the studio till the booth is broke
    Since my youth I've grown theres no room to joke, I'm constantly training
    Imagination beyond promising stage gigs but honestly I prolly wont make it
    Modesty theres no stopping me when my philosophise are oddly awaken
    Darkend odyssies got me shraply taking my time just to sit an concentrate
    Instead of critics dropping hate, I wish they would just listen to my tapes
    Reminisce an visit all the mishtif as an up commin artisit I vividly went thru
    Now consecutives with little businesses are now instantly giving me pencils
    So no longer are my scripts inscripted in scribble, An now I'm able to write
    I see through the fables an lies, Before I sign a contract I'll dissable my mic
    I'm still capable of cradling my life, Everynight thinkin of wich label to sign
    Wich dotted line on the paper to write,...... Now feeling closer to stardum
    My sources have longend,.. All over the globe I'm known for my art work
    I've growned as an artist, Rose from the bottom,... And made it to the top
    Its amazing how I charg'd, Now any were you go my name is on the charts

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    Yo dis was sick off da hook for real, And i know it was for a Tourny too, So really nice work. Excellent vocab, Nothing what soever wrong with that, Exellent flow and multis. Punchez in there too. Nice drop Man. GG reppin in here. these are times when im glad im in GG. 10/10

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    Yo man this shit was real dope man nice work
    Nothin' wrong with this drop man
    You did everythin' to the besta your ability
    And it came out really nice no doubt
    Keep droppin' dawg hot shit

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    Darkend odyssies got me shraply taking my time just to sit an concentrate
    Instead of critics dropping hate, I wish they would just listen to my tapes

    i was feelin this line fo real, nice drop, structur was nice, flow was gd, keep it up
    It's Manchester By Me, The Crook That I Be, Yall Even Look Or Eye Me, Yall Be Gettin Hooked To An I.V.!

    Vote On These Battles Plz!


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    Thanks for all the feed..


    Still uppin..

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    Yo if you wouldn't mind hit up mine
    R.I.P....My Great Grandfather

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    Damn is right...This shit was hott, the Depth was great, Nice Wordplay, And Great Wittyness was good, Keep ya shit up on RB and ull be Elite

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    Damn, Why this gettin slept on?, I thought this shit was worthy for Open Mic of the month..

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    YO THIS SHIT WAS SICC........I LIKED THE WORD PLAY SUTTN SERIOUS...............
    NICELY DELIVERED..................BUT ONE THING. JUST KEEP DROPPN HOMIE
    ISSS HOTTT

    VOTE ON OPEN BATTLE THAT NEEDS TO CLOSE, THNX....
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    yo you hit the nail on the head! thats whut its all about! 8/10

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    Lets some more feed peeps..

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