street play v da professor

[street_play]

ight 10 lines +
due 1/hr after check in
u drop first
no d/r n all that over stuff
ight bro g/l

[Professor.]

check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! check check...checkity check!!

[Professor.]

Dogg i think ur brain is fucked up from all that coke you snort....
Street, your rhymes gonna get beat up..so..put em on life support....
Like they say....watch what you wish for......you only get one wish.....
How you gonna come up in here....and think you can beat me bitch....
Well....Imma hafta be like prison......Imma hafta fence-you-in...sport....
Hold your tongue...anything you say will be used against-you-in court...
Hey do you wanna know something.....after a while look 'above you'...
See the poll up there....like tennis it's gonna be.......40(me)-love(you)...
It's too bad this bitch wanted me to go first although noobs go last....
Imma blow your brains into your hand and then try to think fast!!!!

Wow this was terrible ......I think but we'll see!!!! good luck

[Garth Elgar]

nice spit B

[street_play]

.....the first thing i notice is the choice of this cat's name
Da professor in r/b......try'na step up to the game.......
this cat holds noweight..wackness is his only possession
after droppin that verse looks like da professor needs a lesson
no only can u not spell...ur punchlines have no impact..always go a mist
......therefore its beyond me why you...think your a lyricist
nigga ur better of goin to LLL..bite lines n drop somethin bitten
cus the 1 thin i noticed bout ur rhymes..there wack even wen prewritten
sum 1 played judge n jury...and found you guilty in the first degree
and soon you'll be banned once again just like wen u use to be bythetree
but nothins changed since then..elevation...has gone astray
cus your just as wack now as your were on your r/b join day
so professor heres another lesson in how to be whored
your prediction of passin is grade A n a lost is your reward



this is a bit weak aswel...cudnt think at all but oh well.....g/l

[Bar-NoN]

was good battle both had a ight flow n punches connected on both sides
but it was street play that hit with his harder punches
was a close battle dow
v/ street play
hit up my battles
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177773 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=175784 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177258 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176716

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[street_play]

uppin.....1111.....leave links n ill hit em up ight pz

[street_play]

uppin 2 leave links

[street_play]

bump

[street_play]

bump

[Professor.]

street I can't believe you man I thought I had this but good job to you man!!!

[Professor.]

uppin!

[Judge Judy]

Dogg i think ur brain is fucked up from all that coke you snort....
Street, your rhymes gonna get beat up..so..put em on life support....
Like they say....watch what you wish for......you only get one wish.....
How you gonna come up in here....and think you can beat me bitch....
Well....Imma hafta be like prison......Imma hafta fence-you-in...sport....
Hold your tongue...anything you say will be used against-you-in court...
Hey do you wanna know something.....after a while look 'above you'...
See the poll up there....like tennis it's gonna be.......40(me)-love(you)...
It's too bad this bitch wanted me to go first although noobs go last....
Imma blow your brains into your hand and then try to think fast!!!!

[b]Pretty dope verse i was feeling it, I liked it alot...Overall..8/10

vs.


From: above you
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.....the first thing i notice is the choice of this cat's name
Da professor in r/b......try'na step up to the game.......
this cat holds noweight..wackness is his only possession
after droppin that verse looks like da professor needs a lesson
no only can u not spell...ur punchlines have no impact..always go a mist
......therefore its beyond me why you...think your a lyricist
nigga ur better of goin to LLL..bite lines n drop somethin bitten
cus the 1 thin i noticed bout ur rhymes..there wack even wen prewritten
sum 1 played judge n jury...and found you guilty in the first degree
and soon you'll be banned once again just like wen u use to be bythetree
but nothins changed since then..elevation...has gone astray
cus your just as wack now as your were on your r/b join day
so professor heres another lesson in how to be whored
your prediction of passin is grade A n a lost is your reward

[b] Damn homie, this fucken shit was dope as fuck ...i was rilly feeling this, you had really tight and hard punches...i give you a overall of 9.5/10

Please drop a vote on my battle with Picture Perfect ...The link is in my Sig

[prodigal_prophet]

sp took this shit..quite handily. prof, work on makin ya punches connect, ya almost has semi-good ideas, but they just didn't land. so work on that shit aight...
sp, ya had nice punches, personals, and flow, and aight structure..could use, work, but good none theless....

v/ streetplay

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[street_play]

uppin.........leave links