10 lines
house rules
you spit first then i spit after you
Bar-NoN
ill-Will
10 lines
house rules
you spit first then i spit after you
ight bet
ight check ima drop in a few
a yo ill-will 2 win u need more dan skillz get no your knees n pray
it lik u drank a gallon of x-lax n the shity flow came out the wrong way
instead of killin the toilet it came out your mouth
kid u aint have a normal birth,, even your momz shited u out
it was a clean, soft hospital where every one cared
they saw u laughed n stared, instead of the ass slap they thru u down the stairs
That y u look lik dat u never goin get a bitch, dont fuck wit me or get left in a ditch
u n a bumy drag queen is equal it’s hard 2 tell which is which
kid dont say u ready 2 play cuz u aint even know the game
u is a pussy,, your bitch n your momz is 1 in the same
it's on u drop when u feel ready which mite take a minute or 2
Verse:
He's lookin for a hand-out of this thread..bitch you get none
He's weak...his punches lack creativity..every Bar has NoN
YOu can say what you want..I was feeding or ghost-writing
THis Sock-Puppet is known for false claims..like the bone..he's not biting
No matter how hard he tries to throw a punch..it remains at No-Weight
You might as well accept your Faith...even Satan tells you not to hate
He's a faggot with the potential of Bar-Hopping just to over-look....
...............the fact he's a herb..put me behind bars..but youll eat the book
& pull it out your ass...Geico beats you at percentages..that why your.....
.............stock crashed...and while your bitchin it'll be about zero to four
*Done*
ight uppin let get sum votes on this shit
need votes
good battle g2g peace
ight 1 nigga........1
uppin need votes break down battle when voting vote
i clearly give this to ill-will because he came with harder punches. Bar, your stuff was too basic for this battle, improve your wordplay and multis. there were a few parts where i felt that you were just trying to find a word to rhyme instead of goin for punches. keep it up tho, u show some potential. ill was sick, still, the biggest room in the world is the room for improvement, both of yall got potential, but ill is more advanced than you bar, i think you just need to practice a little and you'll get the hang of it.-vote ill will
the battle was type close but i think
that bar-non came harder and his punches
were type better.
v/bar-non
aight check out my battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...29#post2170229
ight uppin need votes hit up the polll
a yo ill-will 2 win u need more dan skillz get no your knees n pray
it lik u drank a gallon of x-lax n the shity flow came out the wrong way
instead of killin the toilet it came out your mouth
kid u aint have a normal birth,, even your momz shited u out
it was a clean, soft hospital where every one cared
they saw u laughed n stared, instead of the ass slap they thru u down the stairs
That y u look lik dat u never goin get a bitch, dont fuck wit me or get left in a ditch
u n a bumy drag queen is equal it’s hard 2 tell which is which
kid dont say u ready 2 play cuz u aint even know the game
u is a pussy,, your bitch n your momz is 1 in the same
it was great....better punches
8.2
He's lookin for a hand-out of this thread..bitch you get none
He's weak...his punches lack creativity..every Bar has NoN
YOu can say what you want..I was feeding or ghost-writing
THis Sock-Puppet is known for false claims..like the bone..he's not biting
No matter how hard he tries to throw a punch..it remains at No-Weight
You might as well accept your Faith...even Satan tells you not to hate
He's a faggot with the potential of Bar-Hopping just to over-look....
...............the fact he's a herb..put me behind bars..but youll eat the book
& pull it out your ass...Geico beats you at percentages..that why your.....
.............stock crashed...and while your bitchin it'll be about zero to four
it was alright....but not good enough to win
OVERALL=7.7
VOTE= Bar-NoN
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Celestial
remember to vote on my battle with 'prodagy'