~~~sTr8-PUNCH"Z~~~PT.2 f/b plz...

[Seminole]

I liked it....Part one was a lil better to me....I like how u flipped ya style and threw in the multis....there aint nothin wrong wit tryin out different shit...it only makes u better...and i can agree wit wut u said above...you doin this shit for YOU and only YOU...regardless of how good u do, niggas will always find a way to condemn ya shit...structure didnt bug me, cuz i myself write in paragraph form at times...and why does it matter about the stucture....WE ALL READ IN ONE DIRECTION....LEFT TO RIGHT...so it shouldnt be a big deal...but like i said, niggas will always find some dumb shit to say...good punches kid.

-one

[Lay Doubt.]

I wans't feeling this drop very much. It was filled with self-glorification and vocabulary that was out of context and was used just for the sake of rhyme. Your multis were cool and it did flow well, but like I said, most of it made absolutely no sense in the way that used it. Work on learning what words mean before you type them just to make your verse flow. Your title implied you were aiming for straight punches, but there were no punches in this really. Read some LLL battles if you want to learn how to punch effectively, because punches > flow.. anyday.

Peace.

[KªL¡]

I liked it....Part one was a lil better to me....I like how u flipped ya style and threw in the multis....there aint nothin wrong wit tryin out different shit...it only makes u better...and i can agree wit wut u said above...you doin this shit for YOU and only YOU...regardless of how good u do, niggas will always find a way to condemn ya shit...structure didnt bug me, cuz i myself write in paragraph form at times...and why does it matter about the stucture....WE ALL READ IN ONE DIRECTION....LEFT TO RIGHT...so it shouldnt be a big deal...but like i said, niggas will always find some dumb shit to say...good punches kid.

-one

ayo seminole: appreciate the feedback, and its good to know that someone here understands the normality of wut im sayn plus, you always have good feedback, whether (-) of (+), so i take your words into deep thought,

what alotta ppl dont understand is that, i know yeah its all supposed 2 b in positive criticism to only make eachother better, in what we do here.
and alotta ppl forget that,
always saying yo ya structure is off, blah-zay, blah, but wut they need to get also, is that they are reading something someone else wrote.....and judging on how they wrote it........
their feedback should not interpret that their structure is off. Based on the fact that it wasnt written to fit their needs, and the way they would like to read it.....its not them who write it, so if ya cant follow the flow, or try to, maybe even grasp the concept of the writer........This shit isnt for them......

but enoughf of this long ass feedback, good lookn seminole.....

BASICALLY: IMA KEEP DOING ME.....& AINT NUFF'N GONE CHANGE-----1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176857
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176588
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176852

[Seminole]

Amen to that bro. just do u and only u...