16 lines minumum....
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KALIKOZE911 vs. 'Young Cell'
16 lines minumum....
house rules.......
25 minutes 2 drop after 1st verse....
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iight..... check'n....
im a drop, in a few seconds...........
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"young Cell" quick wit his 'chicken dances', dunn posted so this 'cock-advances' & still no chances...
I break stances, this 'so-sad' cuz this FAGGIT had to 'breakdown' & battle death, I BATTLE wit glances...
His pants is 'wet' like 'school-nerds', who wanna do 'homework', on this FAGGIT? Cus 'Young Cell' is just 'CLASS_less'...
Ya verse is 'Bull', 'Young Cell' is so 'WACK' he bring down 'PROPERTY VALUE ON WEB-BOARDS'...
Your 'Artificial' when it comes to 'character', I'm surprised you even gone 'SPIT' using ya 'OWN' vocal chords...
I'm 'Original' wit words, a lyrical scientist paving the way 'BITCH',
manufacturing 'BATTLE STYLE' inuendo's...
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
had to 'run-quick', to get ya freepostings up for 'RESPECT', cuz real flow in you is really hard 2 'FIND'
I spit on 'time', 'Young Cell' be fishing in 'water's without FISH' cuz all over this board, you 'DRAGG'N-YA-DEAD-LINES'...
You'll 'feel the need' to spit hard on 'PROMINENT people' becuz You'll never be 'one', already fail'd so ima call you my 'G-son'...
Take a 'free-run' among the only one who will 'out-freestyle' your 'PRE-WRITES' & father your 'PITIFUL-ways'...
Another 'Group-E', rap 'pussy*' without 'creativity'. I spit 'bullets' that leave 'YOU' seeing more 'SHELLS' than 'OCEAN-WAVES'...
Nothing saves you against me, cuz CREWS, FRIENDS, ALIASES, can only do so much to help this 'LIL-CHILD'...
Try'na 'buy-time' with me to write ya 'PLAYED_OUT' verse, while U kow I got the 'competance' 4 a straight 'FREESTYLE'...
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
WHO'S NEXT-2-GET-RECYCLED........
gedd@me......
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when the next drop's i'll vote all though it'll be hard to beat that verse Oh and Kalikoze i wanna battle i think it'll be a good one so what do you say well after your finish or wuteva let a nigga kno iight
Where the fuck was I fore they found me?
Floatn in a meadow, dragonflies all around me
Seeded in a ghetto, smokin cigarellos
Stress oceans try to drown me
Walking on water like when Christ did, glidin
Mic in my plam like the trident in the hand of Poseidon
AYO Young Cell Y YOU TAKN 4EVR TO POST UP........WUSSUMATTA,
CANT FIND A GOOD ENUFF BATTLE RHYME...........
TO CUT N PASTE TO YA NOTE PAD..........
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U ready.....
Damn this guy rushed me, wow I dump them 3s
this is a peace of cake, but with the KALI this lame stunt wit G
right to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, its just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
im suggestin that you testing this, you learnn the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settlen dudes
the point is im a head of my time .an lame I been better then you//
really you multis suck, to battle is more to style
hes like you is sick naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
LMAO at the last line
Good verse son dukes
Uppin 4 Votes, Plz
No Hater Votes.............
Drop Linx, Will Return The Favor..............
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Uppin...............
Can I Get Some More Feed Back On This............
I Need It. Upp The Votes Plz............this Dude Garbage
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Can I Get Some More Votes Plz ............................ppl
Will Return The Fav:
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kalikoze got this... just a more complex verse, an way harder punches... youngcell barely had any punches... your last line was ight:
im killin you silent so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
but all this was just filler basicaly:
right to much bull shit like you come for me
you pussy, its just that time of month to bleed//
i stunt for free, and you know I hold the weapon
im suggestin that you testing this, you learnn the lessons
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
both had cool multis though... kalikoze just came harder:
Like 'Nintendo's' you 'PLAY'd-OUT' "PEON", you dont 'punch', they all scratches, like 'DEFENSELESS-hoes'...
coo
I could 'hold-up signs' & let you 'combine-MINDS' with cats here, you'd still have 'SHITTY' rhymes...
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
those were coo too... pretty good battle, props to both... but:
vote-kalikoze911
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PS: please return the favor an vote in the battle in my signature, thanks.
Weak battle, kalikoze came straighter all around with his verse... Since I read I will vote.
Young Cell - Something tells me this isnt your only account, sean-fetti? Either way you need to lengthen your lines drastically and straighten the structure. it is called structure for a reason man. The better structure, the less dleay you have because you know what you want in your verse. Your punches were all played but concepts were on target for a beginner... Keep battling, and work on your surrounding words a little more.
Kalikoze - You came with better everything in this battle, except conepts.. I mean they were about average beginner on both sides so there is nothing wrong with it. Point, is, you were better.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176756
^ thanks.
^^^^word thanks yo keep it up ...........................
yo i gotta give this to young cell.... kalikoze did have harder punches but youngcells verse was structured WAY better.
step into the lessons of perfectionist
this kid devilish notice his flow is still effortless
killen this foe and turning heads like the exorcist//
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settlen dudes
the point is im a head of my time .an lame I been better then you//
really you multis suck, to battle is more to style
hes like you is sick naw really I think the boy is wild
i was feelin that.
1 thing i liked from kalikoze was:
I'll put ya 'BRAIN' on 'verbal-lockdown', imprison' ya lost soul, & have ya 'WHOLE' unwitty STYLE 'doin-time'...
v/ young cell
young cell laid a straight merk game......kaloko just wuznt ready!!!!!
my rhymes shine like a bezel or two
clap medal your threw, ill Hansel and griddle you crew
you wack, remind me of game but im not settlen dudes
the point is im a head of my time .an lame I been better then you//
really you multis suck, to battle is more to style
hes like you is sick naw really I think the boy is wild
im sonnin you man you know the boy is foul
im killin you silent so why would anyone want the 40KAL//
my favorite part just blew dude out the water..........i didnt even like readin da otha guys shit no flow and da punches hit like a gay mouse....no hatin just opion
vote~ young cell
isnt that like 2 - 2 now??????????????????????????
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