The Devils Breath

[Keynote]

The Devils Breath
By Keynote


When Satan breaths…worlds fall into paranormal death beds
Hearts reform into evil shreds, ripped from gods thought cells
Hell reappears, then rape's lifeless features from deaf ears
The devil shrieks in monotone, and in fear we wipe silent tears
He sneers as raise from the sun, caught in hearts of everyone
dumbstruck we ignore deaths warning, as we evaporate under the thumb
Killing's from his wicked blood, drip onto eternity's doors
mothers, priests, children, hoe's...all teeth upon his mighty jaws
our flaws get tattered and torn, until were chewed up and worn...
and before we wither and fall...to the devils mouth we call!
asking for his septic breath to show mercy, and the acid seize
As pawns we realise thoughts at increased speeds with eternal peace
But from the belly of the beast, a vivid white warm glow shines
Angels take control of mind…and rise to erode the evil sunrise
I find my soul floating, out of the stench of deaths gates
but a place where i can breath, and my hands not on the clock of fate
My mind erased, of septic waters, crooked trees and poisoned leaves
God saved me with a sneeze, but you will one day see the devil breath!


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[Laureate]

This was pretty good bro...havent seen you drop anything in
a while...there were a few grammatical errors...
"raise" should be "rays"
no apostrophe in "rape's" small stuff you should check next
time....Overall this was nice...I was feeling your wordchoice
vocab was straight...good drop


peep please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176291