Thanx for the feed............keep it comin
Thanx for the feed............keep it comin
nice drop.had structure and flow.ya touched some topics on the war in irak,had somethin to say;that was good.don't like 50 so i didn't like the 50 spit.overall it was like it said nice.not somethin to say "back.....and better then ever",needs improvements.didn't feel the piece that good either,don't know what was the cause,maybe cuz it's an ordinary drop;nuthin spectaculos.but,keep it up!
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2 me da shit was hot but then again about anytthing with alot
of vocabulary iz hot
you had a nice flow going through it, simple wordplay but nice flow. you kinda steered off from the begining to the end, talking about one thing then changing to the deaths in iraq, work on that..otherwise nice lil piece, keep working..1
Acctually everything does tie into eachother.........but thanx for the feed
"When we got record sales in headstones from troops sacrificing themselfs "
i think this is my favorite line, it speaks truth, and it was well written, could have been longer but keep droppin.....
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^^thanx for your input keep it comin..............
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