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Thread: an emcees passion

  1. #1

    an emcees passion

    in influential times my rhymes remain one of a kind
    spoken words from a piece of mind
    i flow freely constant creativity diagnosis benign

    deep thoughts of hip hop brain cells active non stop
    spit like clock work killer verses tic-chop

    im so prominent your quick to make an assumption/
    when the truth is revealed your confused cause a female spits funk like confunkshun/
    they say "girls dont have a place in this rap junction"/
    my fiya to the highest degree when i lay words you suffer from a concussion/

    damn could you ever fathom
    that the rib of man would excel adam?

    1 step from the plate my goal is to annihilate without hesitation/
    accepted, respected, lyrically injected is my sole destination/
    my lack of compassion coincides my arrangement of complication/
    my mind releases so much liquid my brain suffers from dehydration/
    an intricate session hazardous, rigorous, my vivid imagination lets lethal words escape that creates devestation/
    my time is now i rise and reign with the best to attest an emcees contemplation

  2. #2
    Will Merk You
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    lol the dehydration line was kool.. not a bad piece here, you got some room for improvement.. maybe string your punches together a little better and tighter up the rhyme scheme but this was a nice read.. pretty consistant.. peep this
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176138
    Good Luck. You're Gonna Need It.

  3. #3
    thanks for the fb..im workin on me

  4. #4
    Drop Is Average.
    Rhyme Scheme Is Okay.
    Multies... ... ...
    Wordplay Was All Right.
    Elevation On Those Key Parts.
    Blood Angel Dynasty...

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

  6. #6
    check out:
    the scriptures:writings of a mortal soul by k-9 the shit
    whatever happened to hip hop by sexi-dominicana
    Last edited by immortal heart; March 8th, 2005 at 04:33 PM

  7. #7
    Rikimaru I Incis's Avatar
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    wordplay was nice..thats true i liked it..i liked the 'tic-shop' lol..nice drop.
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