8 Bars And Runnin'.....FeedBack Plz.....

[G-Money]

oh,no im back here... like baby bash n a-kon
the smirk on my face attracts more gurls then a-von
been in a lil trouble but dont worry im safe mom
back witta lil more intensity that my raps is based on
im like luda i came to take the number one spot
to steal all the bitches n take em to my can-dy shop
we-cant-be-stopped, its g-money n s*t*a*t*s
spilt muthafuckas up like the g-unit camp
terrorize newbies like a terrorist attack
my team move-forward while yall relapse
foo's can talk crap but its never enough
i'll show how this cali-boy is forever tough
now that my mind is emancipated, my flows anticipated
gotta make sure that my rhymes aint outdated
imma under-rated over achiever, im make doubters believers
and i dont consider myself hot until im catchin a fever....

TO BE CONTINUED..........

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=167511
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=148657

[ThE kId BiG]

i like it... i wanna see the ''to be continued part'' lol

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[STAT$]

Good shit, money.....I liked this......Audio here we come

[AbusivE]

lol@ the name.... this isn 't really "my thing" but it was decent.. flow n structure was on point...didn 't see to many multis, not as many as there could be... last 2 lines were ill... was a few lines that i wasnt really likin, but the last 2 were ill... nice drop!

[G-Money]

thanks for the feed..... keep it comin dont sleep on me y'all

[G-Money]

Uppin ..............................................

[aLteR EgO 707]

yo this shit is tyte, i like the usage and shit but yo pretty good check my open mic out PLZZ but yo lol on the tytle lol im out
(ppppppppppphhhhhhwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeewwwww)
and im gone

[CrazyCarl]

Had wordplay in there, keep that up. Some nice ideas, but a simple topic. Work on putting your concepts to a topic that you can go in depth with. Flow was alright, and had some vocab in the verse.

[TheReinvention]

Pretty tight drop. Your lyrics were pretty straight, nothing to special there. Structure was cool. I liked the word play you had in it. Overall, your piece was average, and pretty good. Made sense, and flowed well. 7.8/10 (For an Average piece)

[G-Money]

thanks for the feedback...im feelin the love i appreciate it y'all