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Thread: Thinking Out Loud

  1. #1
    Na~Ledge
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    Thinking Out Loud

    Must be the God in Me...

    Grantin me passage to your cerebellum's proximity with imagary bold
    Candid similies from the soul used as compensation to pay the toll
    To conceptual crossrads, sporadically navigated by weaker minds
    Pursuing the unattianable, blind, yet still percieving life's street signs
    Defying street science, my supernatural alliance dismantles that chimistry
    Permiting me to plunge through centuries' memory, reach depths of infinity
    Rather than toil in the shallow pools of wise fools consumed by perceptions
    Misguided direction providers disguised as riders, I refuse to respect them
    My weapon, my third eye, enhanced to transform written word into visuials
    Na a pesant turned imperal, make use of life lessons as inspriational material
    To provide ill lines for vast minds, in 5 minutes post drops to withstand time
    As time stands still, I still feel will driven, athesist mindstate, skill god given
    Overshadowed by the stress given by dwelling in socety's social prisims
    Sufficating individualism, peeps fall victim to mojority's armies of conformity
    Confuse originality with a new generations defience to perform normaly
    But Ledge manage to stay afloat in your seas of a disease called ignorance
    ....................................I'm uninfected and will remain such forth hence


    Just a keystyle, thinkin out loud know

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    Newbie poetic warfare's Avatar
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    keep writing, elevate and find your voice. -one-
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  4. #4
    Na~Ledge
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    uppin

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    yo keep it up and itll all come together
    a-class

  6. #6
    Can I Buss
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    This was nice, good flow, good structure, cool topic .
    Very nice indeed .

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    To conceptual crossrads, sporadically navigated by weaker minds
    Pursuing the unattianable, blind, yet still percieving life's street signs
    Defying street science, my supernatural alliance dismantles that chimistry
    Permiting me to plunge through centuries' memory, reach depths of infinity

  7. #7
    Na~Ledge
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    appreciated.....uppin

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    Art... K9_THESHIT's Avatar
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    What can i say...deep shit,philosophical...just the way i like it...wasn't that long,but ya managed to put a wide variaty of feelings and emotions in there.the usage of vocab was great,hepled on getting the readers attention so he can feal yar piece much better.what i liked the most is that the emotions were so strong,and the way ya described yar own thoughts was ill.keep dropin,and i'll keep reading.
    "My weapon, my third eye, enhanced to transform written word into visuials"-wicked(and i don't say wicked often)
    Def Poets Society

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    Na~Ledge
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    ^thanks for the feed...........bump from the best rapper u never herd...MC Slept On

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    www.theilleffect.com djb's Avatar
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    lol mc slept on. so true. nice work here man. lines seemed just a lil' too long but still very dope. you got your point across. damn you have been a writing machine. nice to see you back repping like you are. and you better have signed up for ss. me you and johnny gotta rock it in there this season.
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    Na~Ledge
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    ^thanks fam...I signed up but it will be another thing if they let me in. I don't know if my post count is high enough to get consideration to get into any leagues

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    Na~Ledge
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    last uppin

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    Still in the grave Johnny 6-feet's Avatar
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    that was some scientific shit my teammate. strong vocab and rhymes to compliement. although the bars were a little overlong... who cares its a written. liked the concept, imagry, boasting. glad to have you on the team man.

    keep posting.

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    $tyle/$witch
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    This Was Deep..Structure Was Nice,Great Emotion

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